第一篇:英語(yǔ)作文公式 無(wú)敵整理版
【提出問(wèn)題 / 作文開(kāi)頭引入話(huà)題】
問(wèn)題的常用詞:question, problem, issue
1.Now we are entering a new era, full of opportunities and challenges.現(xiàn)在我們正在進(jìn)入一個(gè)充滿(mǎn)機(jī)會(huì)和挑戰(zhàn)的新時(shí)代。
2.Now we are entering a brand new era full of opportunities and innovations, and great changes have taken place in people’s attitude towards some traditional practice.現(xiàn)在我們進(jìn)入了一個(gè)充滿(mǎn)機(jī)遇和創(chuàng)新的嶄新時(shí)代,很多人對(duì)某些傳統(tǒng)的看法也發(fā)生了很大改變。
3.In the age of information and communication, … plays an important role.在這信息的年代,…扮演重要的角色。
4.Along with the advance of the society more and more problems are brought to our attention, one of which is that....隨著社會(huì)的不斷發(fā)展,出現(xiàn)了越來(lái)越多的問(wèn)題,其中之一便是______。
5.The human race has entered a completely new stage in its history, with the increasingly rapid economic globalization and urbanization, more problems are brought to our attention.人類(lèi)進(jìn)入了一個(gè)歷史的嶄新的階段,經(jīng)濟(jì)全球化、都市化的速度不斷加快,隨之給我們帶來(lái)了很多問(wèn)題。
6.In the process of modern urban development, we often find ourselves in a dilemma.在都市的發(fā)展中,我們往往會(huì)陷入困境。
7.As society develops, people are attaching much importance to....隨著社會(huì)的發(fā)展,人們開(kāi)始關(guān)注.....Recently, the issue of......has been brought into public focus.近來(lái),_______的問(wèn)題引起了社會(huì)的廣泛關(guān)注。Recently the issue of whether or not...has been in the limelight and has aroused wide concern in the public.近來(lái),是否_______的問(wèn)題已經(jīng)非常明確而且引起了社會(huì)的廣泛關(guān)注。
Recently the phenomenon has aroused wide concern, some people are in alarm that....最近,這種現(xiàn)象引起了人們的廣泛關(guān)注,有人開(kāi)始擔(dān)心______________。
8.The issue whether it is good or not to....has aroused a heated discussion all over the country.______的利與弊已在全國(guó)范圍內(nèi)引起熱烈的討論。
9.People are attaching more and more importance to the interview during job hunting.求職的過(guò)程中,人們慢慢意識(shí)到面試的重要性。
10....plays such an important role that it undeniably becomes the biggest concern of the present world, there comes a question, is it a blessing or a curse?“_______顯得非常重要而成為當(dāng)今世界所關(guān)注的最大的問(wèn)題,這是無(wú)可厚非的。不過(guò),問(wèn)題是:”我們?cè)撊绾尉駬?“
11.People rarely reach an absolute consensus on such a controversial issue.對(duì)于這種極具爭(zhēng)議的話(huà)題,我們很難作出絕對(duì)的回答。
【表述觀點(diǎn) / 作文第一段引出論點(diǎn)】
觀點(diǎn)的用詞:Attitude, opinion, 與其搭配的動(dòng)詞以及詞組:Take, have, come up with,set forth, put forward等。問(wèn)題用詞:Issue, phenomenon,后接介詞, on, over等。
1.As to whether it is a blessing or a curse, however, people take different attitudes.然而,對(duì)于此類(lèi)問(wèn)題,人們持不同的看法。(hold different attitudes 持不同的看;come up with different attitudes 有不同的看法)
2.To this issue, different people come up with various attitudes.對(duì)于這個(gè)問(wèn)題,不同的人持不同的觀點(diǎn)。
3.As to whether it is worthwhile..., there is a long-running controversial debate.It is quite natural that people from different backgrounds may have divergent attitudes towards it.關(guān)于是否值得_____的問(wèn)題,一直以來(lái)爭(zhēng)論不休。當(dāng)然,不同的人對(duì)此可能持不同的觀點(diǎn)。
4.People from different backgrounds would put different interpretations on the same case.不同行業(yè)的人對(duì)同一種問(wèn)題的解釋不盡相同。
5.The controversial issue is often brought into public focus.People from different backgrounds hold different attitudes towards the issue.這中極具爭(zhēng)議性的話(huà)題往往很受社會(huì)的關(guān)注。不同的人對(duì)此問(wèn)題的看法也不盡相同。
6.Just as the saying goes: ”so many people, so many minds“.It is quite understandable that views on this issue vary from person to person.俗話(huà)說(shuō),”"。不同的人對(duì)此有不同的看法是可以理解的。
7.There is a good side and a bad side to everything, it goes without saying that...萬(wàn)事萬(wàn)物都有其兩面性,所以,勿庸置疑,____________。
8.When asked..., some people think.....while some prefer...說(shuō)到______,有人認(rèn)為_(kāi)______,而另一些人則認(rèn)為_(kāi)_______。
When it comes to..., most people believe that..., but other people regard...as....When faced with...., quite a few people claim that...., but other people think as...9.There is a public controversy nowadays over the issue of....There who criticize...argue that...., they believe that...,but people who favor.., on the other hand, argue that...目前,______問(wèn)題爭(zhēng)議較大。批判_______的人認(rèn)為_(kāi)______,他們認(rèn)為_(kāi)______,不過(guò),另一方面,贊同_______的人則認(rèn)為_(kāi)________。
10.At present, some people think....while others claim...Both sides have their merits.目前,一些人認(rèn)為_(kāi)______而另一些人則認(rèn)為_(kāi)______。其實(shí),兩種觀點(diǎn)都其可取之處。
11.Some people are of the opinion that...Some people advocate that....They hold that...Many people(would)claim that...(A majority of 絕大多數(shù)A large number of 很多人)
12.But others hold the view that...但是,另外一些人則認(rèn)為_(kāi)______。
But on the other hand, there are also quite a few people who strongly advocate that...不過(guò),另一方面,也有少部分人堅(jiān)持認(rèn)為_(kāi)______________。
But people who are..., on the other hand , maintain that...However, there are a large number of people who hold a different view concerning this case.However, some others argue that...However, there are also some others who contend that...然而,也有人認(rèn)為_(kāi)_________。
But other people set forth completely totally different argument concerning this case.Some people examine this issue from another angle.有的人用另一角度來(lái)看這一問(wèn)題。
On the other hand, there are also many opponents who strongly...另一方面,也有很多反對(duì)的人,他們認(rèn)為_(kāi)____________。
13.Some people contend that...has proved to bring many advantages.(disadvantages)
People, who advocate that..., have their sound reasons.(grounds)堅(jiān)持認(rèn)為_(kāi)_____的人也有其說(shuō)法(依據(jù))。Those who strongly approve of...have cogent reasons for it.強(qiáng)烈認(rèn)同_______的人有很多原因。
People who support...give some or all of the following reasons.那些支持_________觀點(diǎn)的人列出了如下原因.14.Those who have already benefited from practicing it sing high praise of it.那些從中受益的人對(duì)此大家褒獎(jiǎng)。
15.According to my personality and fondness, I would prefer...rather than...根據(jù)我的個(gè)性以及興趣,我選擇_______而不會(huì)選擇__________。
Personally, I side with the latter(former)opinion...就我個(gè)人而言,我支持后者(前者)___________。Personally, I am in favor of the former point of view.就我個(gè)人而言,我較同意前一種看法。
To my point of view 我認(rèn)為
To my mind, the advantages far overweigh the drawbacks(disadvantages, shortcomings)我認(rèn)為,優(yōu)點(diǎn)勝過(guò)缺點(diǎn)。For my part, I stand on side of the latter opinion that...就我而言,我較贊同后一種觀點(diǎn)________________。As far as I am concerned, I am inclined to be on the side of the latter view.在我看來(lái),我較同意后一種觀點(diǎn)。After a thorough consideration, for my part, I am in favor of the latter view that...經(jīng)過(guò)深思熟慮,我較支持后一種看法,亦即_______。
If asked to make a decision, I would prefer...如果真的需要作出選擇,我寧愿____________。
【分論點(diǎn)的提出及闡述】
并列連詞:and,not only…but also…,besides, furthermore, likewise, moreover
轉(zhuǎn)折連詞:but,yet,despite that, still, however, nevertheless, in spite of, despite, notwithstanding 因果連詞:so,so that,then, therefore, consequently, accordingly, hence, as a result, for this reason 舉例常用詞:To take…as an example,One example is…, Another example is…,for example
比較常用詞(相似的比較):in comparison, likewise, similarly, in the same manner
比較常用詞(相反的比較):on the other hand, conversely, whereas, while, instead, nevertheless, in contrast, on the contrary, compared with …, …
一二三原則:
to begin with, then, furthermore, finally
to start with, next, in addition, finally
first and foremost, besides, last but not least
most important of all, moreover, finally
on the one hand, on the other hand(適用于兩點(diǎn)的情況)
for one thing, for another thing(適用于兩點(diǎn)的情況)
排比句例子:
1.Whether your tastes are modern or traditional, sophisticated or simple, there is plenty in London for you.2.Nowadays, energy can be obtained through various sources such as oil, coal, natural gas, solar heat, the
wind and ocean tides.3.We have got to study hard, to enlarge our scope of knowledge, to realize our potentials and to pay for our
life.(氣勢(shì)恢宏)
【作文結(jié)尾】
Obviously(此為過(guò)渡短語(yǔ)), we can draw the conclusion that…
We can, therefore, come to the conclusion that…
To sum up,...In conclusion,...In brief,...On account of this,...Thus,...Thus, it can be concluded that…
【一些比較好的句式】
1.Nothing is + 比較級(jí)+than to do sth.例句:Nothing is more important than to receive education.沒(méi)有比接受教育更重要的事。
2.…cannot emphasize the importance of … too much.再怎么強(qiáng)調(diào)...的重要性也不為過(guò)。
例句:We cannot emphasize the importance of protecting our eyes too much.3.There is no denying that… 或 No one can deny that…(主要用于描述負(fù)面情況)
例句:There is no denying that our educational system leaves something to be desired(令人不滿(mǎn)意).4.It is universally acknowledged that…全世界都知道...例句:It is universally acknowledged that trees are indispensable to us.全世界都知道樹(shù)木對(duì)我們是不可或缺的。
5.only + 狀語(yǔ) + 小倒裝
例句: Only when we develop ourselves in a well-rounded way can we become productive members of society.6.On no account can we…
例句:On no account can we ignore the value of knowledge.7.So + 形容詞 + be + 主詞 + that + 句子
例句:So precious is time that we can't afford to waste it.時(shí)間是如此珍貴,我們經(jīng)不起浪費(fèi)它。
8.形容詞 + as +主詞+ be,…(雖然...)
例句:Rich as our country is, the qualities of our living are by no means satisfactory.雖然我們的國(guó)家富有,我們的生活品質(zhì)絕對(duì)令人不滿(mǎn)意。
9.By…,…can…
例句:By taking exercise, we can always stay healthy.10.It is time …該是...的時(shí)候了.例句:It is time the authorities concerned taking proper steps to solve the traffic problems.11.There is no one but…沒(méi)有人不...例句:There is no one but longs to go to college.沒(méi)有人不渴望上大學(xué)。
11.be compelled to do sth.不得不...例句:Since the examination is around the corner, I am compelled to give up doing sports.既然考試迫在眉睫,我不得不放棄做運(yùn)動(dòng)。
12.It is conceivable that…可想而知的,…
例句:It is conceivable that knowledge plays an important role in our life.13.is a real idol for是…的典范
例句:He is a real idol for all of Chinese youth.14.It pays to do sth....是值得的.例句:It pays to help others.幫助別人是值得的。
15.spare no effort to do sth.不遺余力地…
例句:We should spare no effort to beautify our environment.我們應(yīng)該不遺余力的美化我們的環(huán)境。
16.bring home to sb.sth.讓...明白...例句:We should bring home to people the value of working hard.我們應(yīng)該讓人們明白努力的價(jià)值。
17.be closely related to…與...息息相關(guān)
例句:Taking exercise is closely related to health.做運(yùn)動(dòng)與健康息息相關(guān)。
18.Pose a great threat to…對(duì)...造成一大威脅
例句:Pollution poses a great threat to our existence.19.do one's utmost to do sth.盡全力去...例句:We should do our utmost to achieve our goal in life.我們應(yīng)盡全力去達(dá)成我們的人生目標(biāo)。
第二篇:英語(yǔ)作文萬(wàn)能公式
一 開(kāi)頭萬(wàn)能公式:
1.開(kāi)頭萬(wàn)能公式一:名人名言有人問(wèn)了,“我沒(méi)有記住名言,怎么辦?尤其是英語(yǔ)名言?”,很好辦:編!原理:我們看到的東西很多都是創(chuàng)造出來(lái)的,包括我們欣賞的文章也是,所以盡管編,但是一定要聽(tīng)起來(lái)很有道理呦!而且沒(méi)準(zhǔn)將來(lái)我們就是名人呢!對(duì)吧?經(jīng)典句型:A proverb says,“ You are only young once.”(適用于已記住的名言)It goes without saying that we cannot be young forever.(適用于自編名言)更多經(jīng)典句型:As everyone knows,No one can deny that? 2.開(kāi)頭萬(wàn)能公式二:數(shù)字統(tǒng)計(jì)原理:要想更有說(shuō)服力,就應(yīng)該用實(shí)際的數(shù)字來(lái)說(shuō)明。原則上在議論文當(dāng)中不應(yīng)該出現(xiàn)虛假數(shù)字的,可是在考試的時(shí)候哪管那三七二十一,但編無(wú)妨,只要我有東西寫(xiě)就萬(wàn)事大吉了。所以不妨試用下面的句型:According to a recent survey,about 78.9% of the college students wanted to further their study after their graduation.看起來(lái)這個(gè)數(shù)字文鄒鄒的,其實(shí)都是編造出來(lái)的,下面隨便幾個(gè)題目我們都可以這樣編造:Honesty
根據(jù)最近的一項(xiàng)統(tǒng)計(jì)調(diào)查顯示,大學(xué)生向老師請(qǐng)假的理由當(dāng)中78%都是假的。Travel by Bike
根據(jù)最近的一項(xiàng)統(tǒng)計(jì)調(diào)查顯示,85%的人在近距離旅行的時(shí)候首選的交通工具是自行車(chē)。Youth
根據(jù)最近的一項(xiàng)統(tǒng)計(jì)調(diào)查顯示,在某個(gè)大學(xué),學(xué)生的課余時(shí)間的70%都是在休閑娛樂(lè)。Five-day Work Week Better than
Six-day Work?
根據(jù)最近的一項(xiàng)統(tǒng)計(jì)調(diào)查顯示,98%的人同意每周五天工作日。更多句型:A recent statistics shows that ?
二 結(jié)尾萬(wàn)能公式:
1.結(jié)尾萬(wàn)能公式一:如此結(jié)論
說(shuō)完了,畢竟要?dú)w納一番,相信各位都有這樣的經(jīng)歷,領(lǐng)導(dǎo)長(zhǎng)篇大論,到最后終于冒出個(gè)“總而言之”之類(lèi)的話(huà),我們馬上停止開(kāi)小差,等待領(lǐng)導(dǎo)說(shuō)結(jié)束語(yǔ)。也就是說(shuō),開(kāi)頭很好,也必然要有一個(gè)精彩的結(jié)尾,讓讀者眼前一亮,這樣,你就可以拿高分了!比如下面的例子: Obviously(此為過(guò)渡短語(yǔ)),we can draw the conclusion that good manners arise from politeness and respect for others.如果讀者很難“顯而見(jiàn)之”,但說(shuō)無(wú)妨,就當(dāng)讀者的眼光太淺罷了!
更多過(guò)渡短語(yǔ): to sum up,in conclusion,in brief,on account of this,thus更多句型: Thus,it can be concluded that?,Therefore,we can find that?
2.結(jié)尾萬(wàn)能公式二:如此建議
如果說(shuō)“如此結(jié)論”是結(jié)尾最沒(méi)用的廢話(huà),那么“如此建議”應(yīng)該是最有價(jià)值的廢話(huà)了,因?yàn)檫@里雖然也是廢話(huà),但是卻用了一個(gè)很經(jīng)典的虛擬語(yǔ)氣的句型。拽!
Obviously,it is high time that we took some measures to solve the problem.這里的虛擬語(yǔ)氣用得很經(jīng)典,因?yàn)榭脊俦緛?lái)經(jīng)??歼@個(gè)句型,而如果我們自己寫(xiě)出來(lái),你說(shuō)考官會(huì)怎么想呢?更多句型:
Accordingly,I recommend that some measures be taken.Consequently,to solve the problem,some measures should be taken.寫(xiě)作絕招二(寫(xiě)作的七項(xiàng)基本原則)
一、長(zhǎng)短句原則
工作還得一張一馳呢,老讓讀者讀長(zhǎng)句,累死人!寫(xiě)一個(gè)短小精辟的句子,相反,卻可以起到畫(huà)龍點(diǎn)睛的作用。而且如果我們把短句放在段首或者段末,也可以揭示主題:
As a creature,I eat; as a man,I read.Although one action is to meet the primary need of my body and the other is to satisfy the intellectual need of mind,they are in a way quite similar.如此可見(jiàn),長(zhǎng)短句結(jié)合,抑揚(yáng)頓挫,豈不爽哉?牢記!
強(qiáng)烈建議:在文章第一段(開(kāi)頭)用一長(zhǎng)一短,且先長(zhǎng)后短;在文章主體部分,要先用一個(gè)短句解釋主要意思,然后在闡述幾個(gè)要點(diǎn)的時(shí)候采用先短后長(zhǎng)的句群形式,定會(huì)讓主體部分妙筆生輝!文章結(jié)尾一般用一長(zhǎng)一短就可以了。
二、主題句原則
國(guó)有其君,家有其主,文章也要有其主。否則會(huì)給人造成“群龍無(wú)首”之感!相信各位讀過(guò)一些破爛文學(xué),故意把主體隱藏在文章之內(nèi),結(jié)果造成我們稀里糊涂!不知所云!所以奉勸各位一定要寫(xiě)一個(gè)主題句,放在文章的開(kāi)頭(保險(xiǎn)型)或者結(jié)尾,讓讀者一目了然,必會(huì)平安無(wú)事!
特別提示:隱藏主體句可是要冒險(xiǎn)的!
To begin with,you must work hard at your lessons and be fully prepared before the exam(主題句)。Without sufficient preparation,you can hardly expect to answer all the questions correctly.三、一 二 三原則領(lǐng)導(dǎo)講話(huà)總是第一部分、第一點(diǎn)、第二點(diǎn)、第三點(diǎn)、第二部分、第一點(diǎn)?
如此羅嗦??僧吘惯€是條理清楚。考官們看文章也必然要通過(guò)這些關(guān)鍵性的“標(biāo)簽”來(lái)判定你的文章是否結(jié)構(gòu)清楚,條理自然。破解方法很簡(jiǎn)單,只要把下面任何一組的詞匯加入到你的幾個(gè)要點(diǎn)前就清楚了。
1)first,second,third,last(不推薦,原因:俗)
2)firstly,secondly,thirdly,finally(不推薦,原因:俗)
3)the first,the second,the third,the last(不推薦,原因:俗)
4)in the first place,in the second place,in the third place,lastly(不推薦,原因:俗)
5)to begin with,then,furthermore,finally(強(qiáng)烈推薦)
6)to start with,next,in addition,finally(強(qiáng)烈推薦)
7)first and foremost,besides,last but not least(強(qiáng)烈推薦)8)most important of
all,moreover,finally
9)on the one hand,on the other hand(適用于兩點(diǎn)的情況)
10)for one thing,for another thing(適用于兩點(diǎn)的情況)
建議:不僅僅在寫(xiě)作中注意,平時(shí)說(shuō)話(huà)的時(shí)候也應(yīng)該條理清楚!
四、短語(yǔ)優(yōu)先原則
寫(xiě)作時(shí),尤其是在考試時(shí),如果使用短語(yǔ),有兩個(gè)好處:其
一、用短語(yǔ)會(huì)使文章增加亮點(diǎn),如果老師們看到你的文章太簡(jiǎn)單,看不到一個(gè)自己不認(rèn)識(shí)的短語(yǔ),必然會(huì)看你低一等。相反,如果發(fā)現(xiàn)亮點(diǎn)—精彩的短語(yǔ),那么你的文章定會(huì)得高分了。其
二、關(guān)鍵時(shí)刻思維短路,只有湊字?jǐn)?shù),怎么辦?用短語(yǔ)是一個(gè)辦法!比如:
I cannot bear it.可以用短語(yǔ)表達(dá):I cannot put up with it.I want it.可以用短語(yǔ)表達(dá):I am looking forward to it.這樣字?jǐn)?shù)明顯增加,表達(dá)也更準(zhǔn)確。
五、多實(shí)少虛原則
原因很簡(jiǎn)單,寫(xiě)文章還是應(yīng)該寫(xiě)一些實(shí)際的東西,不要空話(huà)連篇。這就要求一定要多用實(shí)詞,少用虛詞。我這里所說(shuō)的虛詞就是指那些比較大的詞。比如我們說(shuō)一個(gè)很好的時(shí)候,不應(yīng)該之說(shuō)nice這樣空洞的詞,應(yīng)該使用一些諸如generous,humorous,interesting,smart,gentle,warm-hearted,hospital 之類(lèi)的形象詞。再比如:
走出房間,general的詞是:walk out of the room
但是小偷走出房間應(yīng)該說(shuō):slip out of the room
小姐走出房間應(yīng)該說(shuō):sail out of the room
小孩走出房間應(yīng)該說(shuō):dance out of the room
老人走出房間應(yīng)該說(shuō):stagger out of the room
所以多用實(shí)詞,少用虛詞,文章將會(huì)大放異彩!
六、多變句式原則
1)加法(串聯(lián))
都希望寫(xiě)下很長(zhǎng)的句子,像個(gè)老外似的,可就是怕寫(xiě)錯(cuò),怎么辦,最保險(xiǎn)的寫(xiě)長(zhǎng)句的方法就是這些,可以在任何句子之間加and,但最好是前后的句子又先后關(guān)系或者并列關(guān)系。比如說(shuō):
I enjoy music and he is fond of playing guitar.如果是二者并列的,我們可以用一個(gè)超級(jí)句式:
Not only the fur coat is soft,but it is also warm.其它的短語(yǔ)可以用:
besides,furthermore,likewise,moreover
2)轉(zhuǎn)折(拐彎抹角)
批評(píng)某人缺點(diǎn)的時(shí)候,我們總習(xí)慣先拐彎抹角說(shuō)說(shuō)他的優(yōu)點(diǎn),然后轉(zhuǎn)入正題,再說(shuō)缺點(diǎn),這種方式雖然陰險(xiǎn)了點(diǎn),可畢竟還比較容易讓人接受。所以呢,我們說(shuō)話(huà)的時(shí)候,只要在要點(diǎn)之前先來(lái)點(diǎn)廢話(huà),注意二者之間用個(gè)專(zhuān)這次就夠了。
The car was quite old,yet it was in excellent condition.The coat was thin,but it was warm.更多的短語(yǔ):
despite that,still,however,nevertheless,in spite of,despite,notwithstanding
3)因果(so,so,so)
昨天在街上我看到了一個(gè)女孩,然后我主動(dòng)搭訕,然后我們?nèi)タХ葟d,然后我們認(rèn)識(shí)了,然后我們成為了朋友?可見(jiàn),講故事的時(shí)候我們總要追求先后順序,先什么,后什么,所以然后這個(gè)詞就變得很常見(jiàn)了。其實(shí)這個(gè)詞表示的是先后或因果關(guān)系!
第三篇:英語(yǔ)萬(wàn)能公式(范文)
內(nèi)容簡(jiǎn)介:失作文者,必定失高考。本文對(duì)高考作文及平時(shí)考生寫(xiě)作經(jīng)常出現(xiàn)的一些問(wèn)題進(jìn)行分析,并對(duì)2010高考作文命題進(jìn)行合理預(yù)測(cè),認(rèn)為2010年高考作文將以材料作文和命題作文為主打,貼近自我和關(guān)注生活是主流,.理性思維與發(fā)散思維是主旨。
近幾年的作文評(píng)卷結(jié)束后,諸位參與改卷的老師不約而同地發(fā)出感慨:“失作文者,必定失高考?!庇纱丝梢?jiàn)高考作文對(duì)高考成敗的重要性。為了提高考生的高考作文水平,下面將對(duì)高考及平時(shí)考生寫(xiě)作經(jīng)常出現(xiàn)的一些問(wèn)題進(jìn)行分析,并對(duì)2010高考作文命題進(jìn)行合理預(yù)測(cè),希望對(duì)2010考生有所幫助。
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一、2010年高考作文的命題趨勢(shì)
1.以材料作文和命題作文為主打。
分析2009年全國(guó)的18道作文題,其中材料作文9道,命題作文8道,話(huà)題作文只有1道??梢?jiàn)話(huà)題作文漸漸淡出,材料作文和命題作文平分秋色,所以2010年高考作文的命題形式還將是材料作文和命題作文主打天下。值得注意的是,2009年高考作文中出現(xiàn)了半命題作文。對(duì)于半命題作文而言,由于其開(kāi)放性比較大,補(bǔ)充題目顯得格外重要,對(duì)此,考生應(yīng)當(dāng)加以重視。
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2.貼近自我和關(guān)注生活是主流。
從近兩年的高考作文來(lái)看,有很大的一個(gè)特點(diǎn),就是重視個(gè)性,關(guān)注社會(huì)。這必將是2010年高考命題的一個(gè)重要趨勢(shì)。2009年高考北京卷的“我有一雙隱形的翅膀”、重慶卷的“我與故事”、天津卷的“我說(shuō)90后”,三個(gè)直轄市的作文一致地以“我”入題,直接關(guān)照了“我”身邊的世界。以“我”的眼光看自己、看世界,是避免假、大、空的策略,更是體現(xiàn)了“我”的情感、態(tài)度、價(jià)值觀和展示自我個(gè)性的正確途徑。作文題目關(guān)注生活,尤其關(guān)注社會(huì)熱點(diǎn)是激發(fā)考生寫(xiě)作熱情的有效方法。2009年各地的高考作文都能貼近生活、貼近時(shí)代。如江西卷的關(guān)于“圓明園流失兔首、鼠首的拍賣(mài)事件”,遼寧卷的關(guān)于“明星代言”,安徽卷的關(guān)于“彎道超越”,江蘇卷的關(guān)于“品味時(shí)尚”,都直接針對(duì)社會(huì),選取社會(huì)熱點(diǎn)問(wèn)題,具有強(qiáng)烈的時(shí)代特色。
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3.真實(shí)誠(chéng)摯和健康向上是主調(diào)。
作文中表達(dá)的思想觀點(diǎn)和感情傾向要健康、積極,要表達(dá)真情實(shí)感。題材的選取上,要從自己熟悉的或親身感受的生活中選材,表達(dá)自己的真實(shí)感受;情感的表達(dá)上,要融入一種誠(chéng)實(shí)、守信、寬容的心理,體現(xiàn)人間的真愛(ài)。如2009年湖南某考生寫(xiě)的《踮起腳尖》,樸實(shí)地?cái)⑹隽艘股盍颂稍诖采想y以入睡的“我”等待在外謀生的父母回家這樣的一件日常生活中的小事,但由于文中再現(xiàn)了父母回家后怕吵醒“我”而“踮起腳尖”上樓、開(kāi)門(mén)、給“我”蓋被子等細(xì)節(jié),所以生動(dòng)地表現(xiàn)了父母對(duì)子女偉大的愛(ài)。這樣的細(xì)節(jié)往往就蘊(yùn)涵著父母的深情。
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4.理性思維與發(fā)散思維是主旨。
2010年的高考作文,在整體上應(yīng)該會(huì)繼續(xù)保持理性的傾向。近幾年的高考作文最大的一個(gè)特點(diǎn),就是把考生引向理性思考的路上,培養(yǎng)考生的思辨能力。如2009年浙江卷“綠葉對(duì)根的情意”,就是要考生談“綠葉”和“根”之間的依存關(guān)系?!案弊甜B(yǎng)哺育“綠葉”,“綠葉”才得以蔥綠茂盛;“綠葉”心懷感恩之情,縱使飄零一生,也眷戀不忘“根”對(duì)自己的呵護(hù)。“根”作用于“綠葉”,“綠葉”反作用于“根”,這種關(guān)系是相輔相成的。近幾年高考作文中新材料作文比較流行,我想關(guān)鍵是由于這種新材料作文讓考生在整體把握的基礎(chǔ)上,能夠從多角度加以闡發(fā),有利于培養(yǎng)考生的發(fā)散思維。因而考生在復(fù)習(xí)中,要加強(qiáng)對(duì)這種新材料作文的訓(xùn)練,培養(yǎng)自己多角度的發(fā)散思維能力。
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二、高考作文及考生的習(xí)作中常出現(xiàn)的問(wèn)題
1.雙基不牢。
高考作文及考生的習(xí)作中常出現(xiàn)的問(wèn)題,反映了考生語(yǔ)文基礎(chǔ)知識(shí)和基本能力不牢固。這主要表現(xiàn)在漢字書(shū)寫(xiě)的錯(cuò)誤率較高,有的考生一篇作文之中竟有10多個(gè)錯(cuò)別字?!犊荚嚧缶V》對(duì)寫(xiě)作明確規(guī)定:語(yǔ)言通順,書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范。這是對(duì)高考作文的基本要求。
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2.審題不清。
雖然近幾年的高考作文出現(xiàn)淡化審題的傾向,不在審題上為難考生,但是考生的作文中還是有跑題的現(xiàn)象。如2009年高考山東卷“見(jiàn)證”這一作文題,就有好多考生對(duì)“見(jiàn)證”理解不準(zhǔn),有的考生立意為“史鐵生見(jiàn)證了身殘志堅(jiān)”,這就是因?yàn)闆](méi)有搞清“見(jiàn)證”的主體,“見(jiàn)證”的主體應(yīng)當(dāng)是所見(jiàn)事件的旁觀者,而非所見(jiàn)事件的經(jīng)歷者。又如考生在審題時(shí),容易顧此失彼。2009年高考安徽卷的“彎道超越”,有的考生只抓住了“彎道”,忘記了“超越”這一關(guān)鍵內(nèi)容;有的考生把“彎道超越”變成了“超越”,只字不提“彎道”,對(duì)材料含意的把握難免失之偏頗。
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3.材料不新。
現(xiàn)在考生的作文普遍存在素材陳舊,缺乏時(shí)代氣息的問(wèn)題。那些不關(guān)心現(xiàn)實(shí)、閱讀面狹窄的考生,只能“舊事重提”。考生作文中使用頻率比較高的素材是關(guān)于屈原、司馬遷、項(xiàng)羽、文天祥、魯迅、張海迪、史鐵生等人的事例,這些成了考生“放之四海而皆準(zhǔn)”的寫(xiě)作素材,成了他們的救命稻草。這些素材雖然也可以采用,但是用得多了就顯得庸俗,也顯得考生視野狹窄。
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4.文體不明。
一般說(shuō)來(lái),高考作文為了體現(xiàn)開(kāi)放性,充分發(fā)揮考生個(gè)體寫(xiě)作才智,往往不限文體。然而不限文體,并不是不要文體,而是讓考生自我選擇擅長(zhǎng)的文體,寫(xiě)出自己的語(yǔ)言風(fēng)格。有些考生寫(xiě)記敘文時(shí)用一半的篇幅來(lái)大發(fā)議論,結(jié)果搞得兩不像。有些考生在寫(xiě)議論文時(shí),只是單純地引用事例,缺少分析論證,沒(méi)有把材料和觀點(diǎn)有機(jī)地聯(lián)系到一起。更有甚者,以創(chuàng)新為名,胡亂地用一些古代的文體,結(jié)果畫(huà)虎不成反類(lèi)犬。
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5.語(yǔ)言不暢。
好多考生在平時(shí)的寫(xiě)作訓(xùn)練中,不注意對(duì)語(yǔ)言的錘煉,在遣詞造句上,顯得蒼白無(wú)力,進(jìn)而形成考生在寫(xiě)作時(shí)心中有話(huà)說(shuō)不出,說(shuō)出話(huà)來(lái)不到位,詞不達(dá)意,言不由衷,表意不暢的局面。有的文章還用了古白話(huà)文的形式,半文半白,弄巧成拙。
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6.卷面不潔。
考場(chǎng)作文中,卷面書(shū)寫(xiě)臟、亂、草的現(xiàn)象俯拾即是,影響了考生的作文成績(jī)。高考作文書(shū)寫(xiě)要遵循這樣的原則:不求書(shū)法之美,但求工整清楚;不求筆法遒勁,只求筆筆清晰;忌連筆字,忌字體忽大忽小。
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三、2010年高考作文應(yīng)試策略
1.審清題意。
考生寫(xiě)作時(shí)一定要有強(qiáng)烈的審題意識(shí)。首先,要讀懂材料。如2009年高考安徽卷的“彎道超越”,考生在寫(xiě)作時(shí)要明確兩個(gè)方面,一是“彎道”,既可實(shí)指困難大、變數(shù)多的賽車(chē)彎道,也可虛指人生道路上的一些關(guān)鍵點(diǎn),是一個(gè)“特殊的階段”,充滿(mǎn)著各種變化的因素,極具風(fēng)險(xiǎn)性、挑戰(zhàn)性,同時(shí)也充滿(mǎn)機(jī)遇??梢?jiàn),這個(gè)“彎道”含有比喻義和引申義。二是“超越”,就是超出、越過(guò)之意,如超越障礙、解決疑難、走出險(xiǎn)境等。這兩個(gè)方面合在一起,就是要在困境、轉(zhuǎn)型、變化的關(guān)鍵時(shí)刻,抓住機(jī)遇,戰(zhàn)勝自我,奮發(fā)向前。其次,要辨析概念,扣住題眼。如2009年高考江蘇卷的“品味時(shí)尚”,考生在寫(xiě)作時(shí)就要理解“時(shí)尚”的內(nèi)涵,“當(dāng)時(shí)的風(fēng)尚,時(shí)興的風(fēng)尚”,它的主要特征體現(xiàn)在審美、創(chuàng)意、時(shí)興、有人認(rèn)同和追求??忌梢赃x取“時(shí)尚”的事物、生活、理念來(lái)“品味”,也可以把“時(shí)尚”作為廣義的文化現(xiàn)象來(lái)“品味”。同時(shí),要把握住題眼“品味”,寫(xiě)作的重點(diǎn)要放在“品味”兩個(gè)字上面,“品味”就是“仔細(xì)體會(huì),玩味”。最后,用好提示語(yǔ),把握好材料的感情導(dǎo)向。如2009年高考江西卷的關(guān)于蔡銘超以高價(jià)拍下銅獸首的材料,考生就要全面地把握材料所含信息,體會(huì)命題的含意。材料中的信息要點(diǎn)有四:(1)國(guó)人強(qiáng)烈反對(duì)拍賣(mài)圓明園非法流失的兔首、鼠首銅像;(2)佳士得拍賣(mài)行仍將其在巴黎拍賣(mài);(3)蔡銘超高價(jià)拍下這兩件文物,但事后拒絕付款,造成流拍;(4)人們對(duì)此有種種議論。通過(guò)對(duì)信息的整合分析,就可以揣摩出命題人的意旨,就是要考生對(duì)文物造成流拍、稱(chēng)了國(guó)人之愿的蔡銘超的行為發(fā)表支持性、肯定性看法。只有把握了這個(gè)主旨,下筆才不會(huì)跑題,觀點(diǎn)才不會(huì)偏離題意。試想,誰(shuí)要是逆國(guó)人之愿去對(duì)蔡銘超發(fā)表批判性、否定性的觀點(diǎn),能得到公眾的認(rèn)可嗎?
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2.積累素材。
貫穿整個(gè)復(fù)習(xí)過(guò)程,應(yīng)堅(jiān)持不懈做好的一項(xiàng)工作,就是強(qiáng)化素材的積累。只有厚積才能薄發(fā),缺少豐厚的積累,考生是無(wú)法寫(xiě)出文質(zhì)兼美、大氣磅礴的文章的??忌鷳?yīng)注意積累如下八個(gè)方面的素材:(1)鋪敘美好的親情和友情的;(2)描摹美麗的景物和感人的場(chǎng)面的;(3)關(guān)注現(xiàn)實(shí)生活的熱點(diǎn)的;(4)熱愛(ài)有品位的文化藝術(shù)的;(5)省察價(jià)值取向、道德情操的;(6)歷練人生觀念、思想方法的;(7)了解前沿科學(xué)技術(shù)的發(fā)展的;(8)展望、預(yù)測(cè)美好的未來(lái)的。同時(shí)考生還要明確素材積累的多種途徑。如對(duì)“借”這一素材就可以從如下幾個(gè)方面進(jìn)行積累:
從課本:(1)假輿馬者,非利足也,而致千里;假舟楫者,非能水也,而絕江河。君子生非異也,善假于物也。(荀子《勸學(xué)》)(2)有志與力,而又不隨以怠,至于幽暗昏惑而無(wú)物以相之,亦不能至也。(王安石《游褒禪山記》)
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從生活:船要遠(yuǎn)航,離不開(kāi)帆和槳,帆使船借助風(fēng)力,槳使船產(chǎn)生動(dòng)力。
從自然:(1)紫藤蘿和牽?;ǎm然沒(méi)有挺拔的軀干,卻憑借枯樹(shù)和籬笆,以昂然之姿向世人展示了自己的美麗;籬笆和枯樹(shù),本無(wú)美麗可言,卻憑借牽?;ê妥咸偬},成就了一道獨(dú)特的風(fēng)景線。(2)月亮本來(lái)是不發(fā)光的,它借助太陽(yáng)光才有了自己的陰晴圓缺。
從歷史:(1)諸葛亮巧借東風(fēng);(2)蕭規(guī)曹隨。
從名人名言:如牛頓說(shuō):“我之所以比笛卡兒看得遠(yuǎn)些,是因?yàn)槲艺驹诰奕说募绨蛏??!?/p>
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3.搭建結(jié)構(gòu)。
好多時(shí)候老師都對(duì)考生講,高考時(shí)要帶著“作文”進(jìn)考場(chǎng)。這說(shuō)的不是準(zhǔn)備作弊,而是要求考生在進(jìn)入考場(chǎng)前,心中要明白自己熟悉的文章結(jié)構(gòu)。最基本的要掌握記敘文、議論文兩種體裁常見(jiàn)的結(jié)構(gòu)方式。如記敘文常見(jiàn)的結(jié)構(gòu)形式有:線索串珠式、時(shí)空貫穿式、畫(huà)面組合式、穿插回放式和巧設(shè)懸念式。議論文常見(jiàn)的結(jié)構(gòu)形式有:并列式、總分式、層進(jìn)式和對(duì)照式。有時(shí)考生不光要掌握這些大的框架結(jié)構(gòu),還要細(xì)化到每一個(gè)段落,如議論文的主體部分如何進(jìn)行論述。好多考生只會(huì)用簡(jiǎn)單的觀點(diǎn)(分論點(diǎn))加材料來(lái)論證,缺乏分析,沒(méi)有把觀點(diǎn)和材料有機(jī)地連接到一起。這就要在平時(shí)做好建構(gòu),如下面的例子:
古人云“自古才子出寒門(mén)”。(論點(diǎn))古今中外成才者,大多出自貧寒人家。范仲淹兩歲喪父,幼時(shí)讀書(shū)時(shí)連稠一點(diǎn)的粥都難以吃到;司馬光亦出身貧寒;明代大學(xué)士宋濂家中一貧如洗;蘇聯(lián)偉大的作家高爾基曾經(jīng)是個(gè)流浪兒;荷蘭畫(huà)家梵高也曾窮困潦倒,一文不名,生活上??康艿芙訚?jì);居里夫人剛滿(mǎn)十歲,就去打工,還供姐姐讀┦欏?(列舉論據(jù))這都是幼時(shí)曾貧困而后來(lái)成為“才子”的非常之人?!昂T(mén)”是他們植根的土壤,也就是這塊貧瘠的土壤使他們不斷地成熟,塑造自我,完善自我,最終成為參天大樹(shù),開(kāi)出燦爛之花。由此看來(lái),貧窮并不可怕,可怕的是喪失擺脫貧窮的信心和斗志。窮則思變,貧窮就要奮發(fā)圖強(qiáng),越是貧困越能激勵(lì)人奮發(fā)上進(jìn),這又何嘗不是一筆財(cái)富呢?(分析)
上面這則材料就做到了觀點(diǎn)和材料的有機(jī)連接,對(duì)論據(jù)的分析和闡述使論點(diǎn)鮮明。
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4.優(yōu)化語(yǔ)言。
語(yǔ)言要有文采,這是發(fā)展等級(jí)里的要求,“有文采”就是要求作文“用詞貼切、句式靈活,善于運(yùn)用修辭手法,文句有表現(xiàn)力”。但并不是一篇文章中這幾個(gè)要求都要具備,其實(shí)只要有一個(gè)亮點(diǎn),就能使文章出彩。如引用名言警句,與歷史名人的故事相配合,如果運(yùn)用自如,恰到好處,也能顯示出考生的語(yǔ)言功底,增強(qiáng)文章的厚重感和可信度。如2009年某安徽考生的高考作文《轉(zhuǎn)彎之后,是個(gè)春天》的片斷:
青山相伴,濁酒相隨,菊花相依,歸隱山林,自成樂(lè)趣,享受恬靜幽雅的自然風(fēng)光。陶淵明是一個(gè)成功者,他能無(wú)畏而平靜地離去,釋然說(shuō):“少無(wú)適俗韻,性本愛(ài)丘山。誤落塵網(wǎng)中,一去三十年?!彼哌M(jìn)青山綠水間,在竹籬茅屋下,秋菊小徑上,自酌一杯淡酒,緩緩送入口中,享受那一份寧?kù)o,享受“曖曖遠(yuǎn)人村,依依墟里煙。狗吠深巷中,雞鳴桑樹(shù)巔”的靜謐致遠(yuǎn)?;蛟S,他真的屬于自然,他熱愛(ài)自然,喜愛(ài)那“山氣日夕佳,飛鳥(niǎo)相與還”的恬淡生活。他那“不戚戚于貧賤,不汲汲于富貴”的品格,最終使他與仕途無(wú)緣,成就了他的文學(xué)夢(mèng),迎來(lái)了轉(zhuǎn)過(guò)彎道之后的燦爛春天。
文中四次引用陶淵明的詩(shī)文名句,印證了陶淵明的成就,這些表現(xiàn)了作者駕馭語(yǔ)言的高超技巧,很有說(shuō)服力和表現(xiàn)力。
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5.打造亮點(diǎn)。
高考作文不比平時(shí)作文,由于閱卷時(shí)間緊任務(wù)重,又因?yàn)榭忌淖魑膬?nèi)容和形式往往雷同,閱卷老師一直處于疲憊狀態(tài),這就要求考生作文能讓閱卷老師眼前一亮,這樣分?jǐn)?shù)就有可能上去了。那么如何打造亮點(diǎn)呢?我認(rèn)為要做好以下幾點(diǎn):(1)以漂亮的卷面“迷住”閱卷老師的眼;(2)以閃亮的標(biāo)題“煽起”閱卷老師的情;(3)以靚麗的“鳳頭”激起閱卷老師的閱讀興趣;(4)以?xún)?yōu)美的文筆打動(dòng)閱卷老師的心;(5)以精彩的“豹尾”勾住閱卷老師的魂。
第四篇:英語(yǔ)作文模版,公式2
寫(xiě)作模板:
辯論式議論文
模版1
Some people believe(argue, recognize, think)that 觀點(diǎn)1.But other people take an opposite side.They firmly believe that 觀點(diǎn)2.As for me, I agree to the former/latter idea.There are a dozen of reasons behind my belief.First of all, 論據(jù)1.More importantly, 論據(jù)2.Most important of all, 論據(jù)3.In summary, 總結(jié)觀點(diǎn).As a college student, I am supposed to 表決心.或 From above, we can predict that 預(yù)測(cè).模版2
People hold different views about X.Some people are of the opinion that 觀點(diǎn)1, while others point out that 觀點(diǎn)2.As far as I am concerned, the former/latter opinion holds more weight.For one thing, 論據(jù)1.For another, 論據(jù)2.Last but not the least, 論據(jù)3.To conclude, 總結(jié)觀點(diǎn).As a college student, I am supposed to 表決心.或 From above, we can predict that 預(yù)測(cè).模版3
There is no consensus of opinions among people about X(爭(zhēng)論的焦點(diǎn)).Some people are of the view that 觀點(diǎn)1, while others take an opposite side, firmly believing that 觀點(diǎn)2.As far as I am concerned, the former/latter notion is preferable in many senses.The reasons are obvious.First of all, 論據(jù)1.Furthermore, 論據(jù)2.Among all of the supporting evidences, one is the strongest.That is, 論據(jù)3.A natural conclusion from the above discussion is that總結(jié)觀點(diǎn).As a college student, I am supposed to 表決心.或 From above, we can predict that 預(yù)測(cè).圖表式作文
It is obvious in the graphic/table that the rate/number/amount of Y has undergone dramatic changes.It has gone
up/grown/fallen/dropped considerably in recent years(as X varies).At the point of X1, Y reaches its peak value of …(多少).What is the reason for this change? Mainly there are …(多少)reasons behind the situation reflected in the
graphic/table.First of all, …(第一個(gè)原因).More importantly, …(第二個(gè)原因).Most important of all, …(第三個(gè)原因).From the above discussions, we have enough reason to predict what will happen in the near future.The trend
described in the graphic/table will continue for quite a long time(if necessary measures are not taken括號(hào)里的使用于那些不太好的變化趨勢(shì)).提綱式作文
1. 對(duì)立觀點(diǎn)式
A.有人認(rèn)為X 是好事,贊成X,為什么?
B. 有人認(rèn)為X 是壞事,反對(duì)X,為什么?
C.我的看法。
Some people are in favor of the idea of doing X.They point out the fact that 支持X 的第一個(gè)原因。They also argue that 支持X 的另一個(gè)原因。
However, other people stand on a different ground.They consider it harmful to do X.They firmly point out that 反對(duì)X 的第一個(gè)理由。An example can give the details of this argument: 一個(gè)例子。
There is some truth in both arguments.But I think the advantages of X overweigh the disadvantages.In addition to the above-mentioned negative effects it might bring about, X also may X 的有一個(gè)壞處。
2. 批駁觀點(diǎn)式
A.一個(gè)錯(cuò)誤觀點(diǎn)。
B. 我不同意。
Many people argue that 錯(cuò)誤觀點(diǎn)。By saying that, they mean 對(duì)這個(gè)觀點(diǎn)的進(jìn)一步解釋。An example they have
presented is that 一個(gè)例子。(According to a survey performed by X on a group of Y, almost 80% of them 贊成這個(gè)錯(cuò)誤觀點(diǎn)或者受到這個(gè)錯(cuò)誤觀點(diǎn)的影響)。
There might be some element of truth in these people’s belief.But if we consider it in depth, we will feel no reservation to conclude that 與錯(cuò)誤觀點(diǎn)相反的觀點(diǎn)。There are a number of reasons behind my belief.(以下參照辯論文的議論文寫(xiě)法)。
3. 社會(huì)問(wèn)題(現(xiàn)象)式
A.一個(gè)社會(huì)問(wèn)題或者現(xiàn)象。
B. 產(chǎn)生的原因
C.對(duì)社會(huì)和我們生活的影響
D. 如何杜絕。(如果是問(wèn)題的話(huà))
E. 前景的預(yù)測(cè)。
Nowadays, there exists an increasingly serious social/economic/environmental problem.(X has increasingly become a common concern of the public).According to a survey, 調(diào)查內(nèi)容說(shuō)明這種現(xiàn)象的情況。(或者是一個(gè)例子)。There are a couple of reasons booming this problem/phenomenon.下面參照辯論式議論文的寫(xiě)法。
X has caused substantial impact on the society and our daily life, which has been articulated in the following aspects.參照辯論式議論文的寫(xiě)法。
A dozen of measures are supposed to take to prevent X from bringing us more harm.參照辯論式議論文的寫(xiě)法。Based on the above discussions, I can easily forecast that more and more people will ……..英語(yǔ)四六級(jí)寫(xiě)作絕招
開(kāi)頭萬(wàn)能公式
1. 開(kāi)頭萬(wàn)能公式一:名人名言
有人問(wèn)了,“我沒(méi)有記住名言,怎么辦?尤其是英語(yǔ)名言?”,很好辦:編!
原理:我們看到的東西很多都是創(chuàng)造出來(lái)的,包括我們欣賞的文章也是,所以盡管編,但是一定要聽(tīng)起來(lái)很有道理呦!而且沒(méi)準(zhǔn)將來(lái)我們就是名人呢!對(duì)吧?
經(jīng)典句型:
A proberb says, “ You are only young once.”(適用于已記住的名言)
It goes without saying that we cannot be young forever.(適用于自編名言)
更多經(jīng)典句型:
As everyone knows, No one can deny that…
2. 開(kāi)頭萬(wàn)能公式二:數(shù)字統(tǒng)計(jì)
原理:要想更有說(shuō)服力,就應(yīng)該用實(shí)際的數(shù)字來(lái)說(shuō)明。
原則上在議論文當(dāng)中十不應(yīng)該出現(xiàn)虛假數(shù)字的,可是在考試的時(shí)候哪管那三七二十一,但編無(wú)妨,只要我有東西寫(xiě)就萬(wàn)事大吉了。所以不妨試用下面的句型:
According to a recent survey, about 78.9% of the college students wanted to further their study after their graduation.看起來(lái)這個(gè)數(shù)字文鄒鄒的,其實(shí)都是編造出來(lái)的,下面隨便幾個(gè)題目我們都可以這樣編造:
Honesty:根據(jù)最近的一項(xiàng)統(tǒng)計(jì)調(diào)查顯示,大學(xué)生向老師請(qǐng)假的理由當(dāng)中78%都是假的。
Travel by Bike:根據(jù)最近的一項(xiàng)統(tǒng)計(jì)調(diào)查顯示,85%的人在近距離旅行的時(shí)候首選的交通工具是自行車(chē)。
Youth:根據(jù)最近的一項(xiàng)統(tǒng)計(jì)調(diào)查顯示,在某個(gè)大學(xué),學(xué)生的課余時(shí)間的70%都是在休閑娛樂(lè)。
Five-day Work Week Better than Six-day Work?:根據(jù)最近的一項(xiàng)統(tǒng)計(jì)調(diào)查顯示,98%的人同意每周五天工作日。更多句型:
A recent statistics shows that …
結(jié)尾萬(wàn)能公式
1. 結(jié)尾萬(wàn)能公式一:如此結(jié)論
說(shuō)完了,畢竟要?dú)w納一番,相信各位都有這樣的經(jīng)歷,領(lǐng)導(dǎo)長(zhǎng)篇大論,到最后終于冒出個(gè)“總而言之”之類(lèi)的話(huà),我們馬上停止開(kāi)小差,等待領(lǐng)導(dǎo)說(shuō)結(jié)束語(yǔ)。也就是說(shuō),開(kāi)頭很好,也必然要有一個(gè)精彩的結(jié)尾,讓讀者眼前一亮,這樣,你就可以拿高分了!比如下面的例子:
Obviously(此為過(guò)渡短語(yǔ)), we can draw the conclusion that good manners arise from politeness and respect for others.如果讀者很難“顯而見(jiàn)之”,但說(shuō)無(wú)妨,就當(dāng)讀者的眼光太淺罷了!
更多過(guò)渡短語(yǔ):
to sum up, in conclusion, in brief, on account of this, thus
更多句型:
Thus, it can be concluded that…, Therefore, we can find that…
2. 結(jié)尾萬(wàn)能公式二:如此建議
如果說(shuō)“如此結(jié)論”是結(jié)尾最沒(méi)用的廢話(huà),那么“如此建議”應(yīng)該是最有價(jià)值的廢話(huà)了,因?yàn)檫@里雖然也是廢話(huà),但是卻用了一個(gè)很經(jīng)典的虛擬語(yǔ)氣的句型。拽!
Obviously, it is high time that we took some measures to solve the problem.這里的虛擬語(yǔ)氣用得很經(jīng)典,因?yàn)榭脊俦緛?lái)經(jīng)常考這個(gè)句型,而如果我們自己寫(xiě)出來(lái),你說(shuō)考官會(huì)怎么想呢?更多句型:
Accordingly, I recommend that some measures be taken.Consequently, to solve the problem, some measures should be taken.寫(xiě)作的“七項(xiàng)基本原則”
一、長(zhǎng)短句原則
工作還得一張一馳呢,老讓讀者讀長(zhǎng)句,累死人!寫(xiě)一個(gè)短小精辟的句子,相反,卻可以起到畫(huà)龍點(diǎn)睛的作用。而且如果我們把短句放在段首或者段末,也可以揭示主題:
As a creature, I eat;as a man, I read.Although one action is to meet the primary need of my body and the other is to satisfy the intellectual need of mind, they are in a way quite similar.如此可見(jiàn),長(zhǎng)短句結(jié)合,抑揚(yáng)頓挫,豈不爽哉?牢記!
強(qiáng)烈建議:在文章第一段(開(kāi)頭)用一長(zhǎng)一短,且先長(zhǎng)后短;在文章主體部分,要先用一個(gè)短句解釋主要意思,然后在闡述幾個(gè)要點(diǎn)的時(shí)候采用先短后長(zhǎng)的句群形式,定會(huì)讓主體部分妙筆生輝!文章結(jié)尾一般用一長(zhǎng)一短就可以了。
二、主題句原則
國(guó)有其君,家有其主,文章也要有其主。否則會(huì)給人造成“群龍無(wú)首”之感!相信各位讀過(guò)一些破爛文學(xué),故意把主體隱藏在文章之內(nèi),結(jié)果造成我們稀里糊涂!不知所云!所以奉勸各位一定要寫(xiě)一個(gè)主題句,放在文章的開(kāi)頭(保險(xiǎn)型)或者結(jié)尾,讓讀者一目了然,必會(huì)平安無(wú)事!
特別提示:隱藏主體句可是要冒險(xiǎn)的!
To begin with, you must work hard at your lessons and be fully prepared before the exam(主題句).Without sufficient preparation, you can hardly expect to answer all the questions correctly.三、一二三原則
領(lǐng)導(dǎo)講話(huà)總是第一部分、第一點(diǎn)、第二點(diǎn)、第三點(diǎn)、第二部分、第一點(diǎn)… 如此羅嗦??僧吘惯€是條理清楚??脊賯兛次恼乱脖厝灰ㄟ^(guò)這些關(guān)鍵性的“標(biāo)簽”來(lái)判定你的文章是否結(jié)構(gòu)清楚,條理自然。破解方法很簡(jiǎn)單,只要把下面任何一組的詞匯加入到你的幾個(gè)要點(diǎn)前就清楚了。
1)first, second, third, last(不推薦,原因:俗)
2)firstly, secondly, thirdly, finally(不推薦,原因:俗)
3)the first, the second, the third, the last(不推薦,原因:俗)
4)in the first place, in the second place, in the third place, lastly(不推薦,原因:俗)
5)to begin with, then, furthermore, finally(強(qiáng)烈推薦)
6)to start with, next, in addition, finally(強(qiáng)烈推薦)
7)first and foremost, besides, last but not least(強(qiáng)烈推薦)
8)most important of all, moreover, finally
9)on the one hand, on the other hand(適用于兩點(diǎn)的情況)
10)for one thing, for another thing(適用于兩點(diǎn)的情況)
建議:不僅僅在寫(xiě)作中注意,平時(shí)說(shuō)話(huà)的時(shí)候也應(yīng)該條理清楚!
四、短語(yǔ)優(yōu)先原則
寫(xiě)作時(shí),尤其是在考試時(shí),如果使用短語(yǔ),有兩個(gè)好處:其
一、用短語(yǔ)會(huì)使文章增加亮點(diǎn),如果老師們看到你的文章太簡(jiǎn)單,看不到一個(gè)自己不認(rèn)識(shí)的短語(yǔ),必然會(huì)看你低一等。相反,如果發(fā)現(xiàn)亮點(diǎn)—精彩的短語(yǔ),那么你的文章定會(huì)得高分了。其
二、關(guān)鍵時(shí)刻思維短路,只有湊字?jǐn)?shù),怎么辦?用短語(yǔ)是一個(gè)辦法!比如:
I cannot bear it.可以用短語(yǔ)表達(dá):I cannot put up with it.I want it.可以用短語(yǔ)表達(dá):I am looking forward to it.這樣字?jǐn)?shù)明顯增加,表達(dá)也更準(zhǔn)確。
五、多實(shí)少虛原則
原因很簡(jiǎn)單,寫(xiě)文章還是應(yīng)該寫(xiě)一些實(shí)際的東西,不要空話(huà)連篇。這就要求一定要多用實(shí)詞,少用虛詞。我這里所說(shuō)的虛詞就是指那些比較大的詞。比如我們說(shuō)一個(gè)很好的時(shí)候,不應(yīng)該之說(shuō)nice這樣空洞的詞,應(yīng)該使用一些諸如generous, humorous, interesting, smart, gentle, warm-hearted, hospital 之類(lèi)的形象詞。再比如:
走出房間,general的詞是:walk out of the room
但是小偷走出房間應(yīng)該說(shuō):slip out of the room
小姐走出房間應(yīng)該說(shuō):sail out of the room
小孩走出房間應(yīng)該說(shuō):dance out of the room
老人走出房間應(yīng)該說(shuō):stagger out of the room
所以多用實(shí)詞,少用虛詞,文章將會(huì)大放異彩!
六、多變句式原則
1)加法(串聯(lián))
都希望寫(xiě)下很長(zhǎng)的句子,像個(gè)老外似的,可就是怕寫(xiě)錯(cuò),怎么辦,最保險(xiǎn)的寫(xiě)長(zhǎng)句的方法就是這些,可以在任何句子之間加and, 但最好是前后的句子又先后關(guān)系或者并列關(guān)系。比如說(shuō):
I enjor music and he is fond of playing guitar.如果是二者并列的,我們可以用一個(gè)超級(jí)句式:
Not only the fur coat is soft, but it is also warm.其它的短語(yǔ)可以用:
besides, furthermore, likewise, moreover
2)轉(zhuǎn)折(拐彎抹角)
批評(píng)某人缺點(diǎn)的時(shí)候,我們總習(xí)慣先拐彎抹角說(shuō)說(shuō)他的優(yōu)點(diǎn),然后轉(zhuǎn)入正題,再說(shuō)缺點(diǎn),這種方式雖然陰險(xiǎn)了點(diǎn),可畢竟還比較容易讓人接受。所以呢,我們說(shuō)話(huà)的時(shí)候,只要在要點(diǎn)之前先來(lái)點(diǎn)廢話(huà),注意二者之間用個(gè)專(zhuān)這次就夠了。The car was quite old, yet it was in excellent condition.The coat was thin, but it was warm.更多的短語(yǔ):
despite that, still, however, nevertheless, in spite of, despite, notwithstanding
3)因果(so, so, so)
昨天在街上我看到了一個(gè)女孩,然后我主動(dòng)搭訕,然后我們?nèi)タХ葟d,然后我們認(rèn)識(shí)了,然后我們成為了朋友…可見(jiàn),講故事的時(shí)候我們總要追求先后順序,先什么,后什么,所以然后這個(gè)詞就變得很常見(jiàn)了。其實(shí)這個(gè)詞表示的是先后或因果關(guān)系!
The snow began to fall, so we went home.更多短語(yǔ):
then, therefore, consequently, accordingly, hence, as a result, for this reason, so that
4)失衡句(頭重腳輕,或者頭輕腳重)
有些人腦袋大,身體小,或者有些人腦袋小,身體大,雖然我們不希望長(zhǎng)成這個(gè)樣子,可如果真的是這樣了,也就必然會(huì)吸引別人的注意力。文章中如果出現(xiàn)這樣的句子,就更會(huì)讓考官看到你的句子與眾不同。其實(shí)就是主語(yǔ)從句,表語(yǔ)從句,賓語(yǔ)從句的變形。
舉例:This is what I can do.Whether he can go with us or not is not sure.同樣主語(yǔ)、賓語(yǔ)、表語(yǔ)可以改成如下的復(fù)雜成分:
When to go, Why he goes away…
5)附加(多此一舉)
如果有了老婆,總會(huì)遇到這樣的情況,當(dāng)你再講某個(gè)人的時(shí)候,她會(huì)插一句說(shuō),我昨天見(jiàn)過(guò)他;或者說(shuō),就是某某某,如果把老婆的話(huà)插入到我們的話(huà)里面,那就是定語(yǔ)從句和同位語(yǔ)從句或者是插入語(yǔ)。
The man whom you met yesterday is a friend of mine.I don’t enjoy that book you are reading.Mr liu, our oral English teacher, is easy-going.其實(shí)很簡(jiǎn)單,同位語(yǔ)--要解釋的東西刪除后不影響整個(gè)句子的構(gòu)成;定語(yǔ)從句—借用之前的關(guān)鍵詞并且用其重新組成一個(gè)句子插入其中,但是whom or that 關(guān)鍵詞必須要緊跟在先行詞之前。
6)排比(排山倒海句)
文學(xué)作品中最吸引人的地方莫過(guò)于此,如果非要讓你的文章更加精彩的話(huà),那么我希望你引用一個(gè)個(gè)的排比句,一個(gè)個(gè)得對(duì)偶句,一個(gè)個(gè)的不定式,一個(gè)個(gè)地詞,一個(gè)個(gè)的短語(yǔ),如此表達(dá)將會(huì)使文章有排山倒海之勢(shì)!
Whether your tastes are modern or traditional, sophisticated or simple, there is plenty in London for you.Nowadays, energy can be obtained through various sources such as oil, coal, natural gas, solar heat, the wind and ocean tides.We have got to study hard, to enlarge our scope of knowledge, to realize our potentials and to pay for our life.(氣勢(shì)恢宏)
要想寫(xiě)出如此氣勢(shì)恢宏的句子非用排比不可!
七、挑戰(zhàn)極限原則
既然是挑戰(zhàn)極限,必然是比較難的,但是并非不可攀!
原理:在學(xué)生的文章中,很少發(fā)現(xiàn)諸如獨(dú)立主格的句子,其實(shí)也很簡(jiǎn)單,只要花上5分鐘的時(shí)間看看就可以領(lǐng)會(huì),它就是分詞的一種特殊形式,分詞要求主語(yǔ)一致,而獨(dú)立主格則不然。比如:
The weather being fine, a large number of people went to climb the Western Hills.Africa is the second largest continent, its size being about three times that of China.如果您可一些出這樣的句子,不得高分才怪!
文章主體段落三大殺手锏
一、舉實(shí)例
思維短路,舉實(shí)例!提出一個(gè)觀點(diǎn),舉實(shí)例!提出一個(gè)方案,舉實(shí)例!而且者也是我們揭示一個(gè)觀點(diǎn)最好的方式,任何情況下,只要我們無(wú)法繼續(xù)文章,不管三七二十一,盡管舉例子!
In order to attract more customers, advertisers have adopted every possible stimulative factor in making ads, such as sound, light, colours, cartoon films and human performance.For instance, to advertise a certain food, advertisers will ask an actor or actress to sit at a table and devour the seemingly delicious food while they fime him or her.更多句型:
To take … as an example, One example is…, Another example is…, for example
二、做比較
方法:寫(xiě)完一個(gè)要點(diǎn),比較與之相似的;又寫(xiě)完一個(gè)要點(diǎn),再比較與之相反的;
世界上沒(méi)有同樣的指紋,沒(méi)有相同的樹(shù)葉,文章亦同,只有通過(guò)比較,你才會(huì)發(fā)現(xiàn)二者的相同點(diǎn)(through comparison)和不同點(diǎn)(through contrast)。下面是一些短語(yǔ):
相似的比較:
in comparison, likewise, similarly, in the same manner
相反的比較:
on the other hand, conversely, whereas, while, instead, nevertheless, in contrast, on the contrary, compared with …, …
三、換言之
沒(méi)話(huà)說(shuō)了,可以換一句話(huà)再說(shuō),讓你的文章在多一些字,或者文鄒鄒地說(shuō),是讓讀者更充分的理解你的觀點(diǎn)。實(shí)際就是重復(fù)重復(fù)再重復(fù)!下面的句子實(shí)際上就三個(gè)字 I love you!
I am enthusiastic about you.That is to say, I love you.I am wild about you.In other words, I have fallen in love with you.或者上面我們舉過(guò)的例子:
I cannot bear it.可以用短語(yǔ)表達(dá):I cannot put up with it.因此可以這樣說(shuō):I cannot bear it.That is to say, I cannot put up with it or I am fed up with it.更多短語(yǔ):
in more difficult language, in simpler words, put it more simply
四六級(jí)寫(xiě)作常見(jiàn)句型
(1)用于描寫(xiě)漫畫(huà)、圖表的常用句型
①As the graph depicts , …
②From the cartoon /picture , we can see that …
③According to the statistics shown in the first /second graph ,④The table shows / indicates / reveals that …
⑤It can be seen /concluded from the picture / table / figures that …
(2)用于句首提出論題或現(xiàn)象的句型
①Recently , …h(huán)as become the focus of the society.②…h(huán)as been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life.③Nowadays there is a growing concern for …
④Nowadays it is common to hear /see …
⑤…h(huán)as become a common occurrence in our daily life.⑥Nowadays more and more people are beginning to be aware of the seriousness of …
⑦It is only during the last /past few years that man has become generally aware that …
⑧There is an old / popular saying / proverb which says / goes …
⑨In recent years , there is a general tendency …
⑩Nowadays … has become a problem we have to face.(3)用于比較、闡述不同觀點(diǎn)的常用句型
①Some people like / prefer …, while others are / feel inclined to …
②There are different opinions among people as to … Some believe … whole hold …
③Some people claim that … is superior to … Others , however , disagree with it.④Some people believe … Others maintain … Still others claim …
⑤Some people suggest … Others , however , hold the opposite opinion.⑥On the one hand , people tend to … On the other hand , they feel …
⑦Some people argue that … Others , in contrast , believe that …
⑧Although more and more people come to believe … there are still others who insist that …
⑨On the contrary , there are people in favor of …
⑩There are some people who hold different opinions about …
(4)用于陳述個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)/想法的常用句型
①M(fèi)y own experience tells me that …
②In my opinion , we should attack more importance to …
③As for my own idea about … I believe …
④As far as I am concerned , I plan to …
⑤Personally , I prefer …
⑥In my view , both sides are partly right in that …
⑦But for me , I would rather …
⑧My own point of view is that …
⑨In conclusion , I support the statement that …
⑩As regards me , I tend to choose …
(5)用于書(shū)信寫(xiě)作的常用句型
①Thank you for your letter of …
②It is a pleasure for me invite you on behalf of … to accept …
③Thanks so much for your letter , which arrived …
④I am writing to you with reference to …
⑤I am writing to you in connection with …
⑥I would be grateful if you could / would …
⑦I would like to know some information on …
⑧It will be appreciated if you can / could …
⑨I would also like to know if you can / could …
⑩I look forward to hearing from you.(6)用于結(jié)尾的常用句型
①From what has been discussed / mentioned above , we may conclude that …
②Therefore , it is not difficult to draw / come to the conclusion that …
③It is high time that something was done about …
④From all the reasons / consideration above , it is evident / clear / obvious that …
⑤Taking into account all these factors , we may reach the conclusion that …
⑥Given the reasons / consideration I have just outlined / discussed / presented , I strongly recommend that …⑦It is clear , therefore , that …
⑧All in all ,what really matters is , in fact , to …
⑨It is essential that effective measure be taken to …
⑩From what has been discussed above , we may reasonably arrive at the conclusion that …
⑾ In conclusion ,the most important is …
⑿ On the whole , it is high time that every one …
⒀ As a result , we should take some effective steps to …
⒁ Judging by the figures / statistics , it is not difficult to see that …
⒂ Only in this way / in so doing , can be really …
四六級(jí)寫(xiě)作基本句式
以下是短文寫(xiě)作中使用率最高、覆蓋面最廣的基本句式,每組句式的功能相同或相似,考生可根據(jù)自己的情況選擇其中的1-2個(gè),做到能夠熟練正確地仿寫(xiě)或套用。
1.表示原因
1)There are three reasons for this.
2)The reasons for this are as follows.
3)The reason for this is obvious.
4)The reason for this is not far to seek.
5)The reason for this is that...
6)We have good reason to believe that...
例如:
There are three reasons for the changes that have taken place in our life.Firstly, people’s living standard has been greatly improved.Secondly, most people are well paid, and they can afford what they need or like.Last but not least, more and more people prefer to enjoy modern life
注:如考生寫(xiě)第一個(gè)句子沒(méi)有把握,可將其改寫(xiě)成兩個(gè)句子。如:Great changes have taken place in our life. There are three reasons for this.這樣寫(xiě)可以避免套用中的表達(dá)失誤。
2.表示好處
1)It has the following advantages.
2)It does us a lot of good.
3)It benefits us quite a lot.
4)It is beneficial to us.
5)It is of great benefit to us.
例如:
Books are like friends.They can help us know the world better, and they can open our mindsand widen our horizons.Therefore, reading extensively is of great benefit to us.
第五篇:英語(yǔ)作文萬(wàn)金油公式
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1. 開(kāi)頭萬(wàn)能公式一:名人名言
有人問(wèn)了,“我沒(méi)有記住名言,怎么辦?尤其是英語(yǔ)名言?”,很好辦:編!
原理:我們看到的東西很多都是創(chuàng)造出來(lái)的,包括我們欣賞的文章也是,所以盡管編,但是一定要聽(tīng)起來(lái)很有道理呦!而且沒(méi)準(zhǔn)將來(lái)我們就是名人呢!對(duì)吧?
經(jīng)典句型:
A proberb says, “ You are only young once.”(適用于已記住的名言)
It goes without saying that we cannot be young forever.(適用于自編名言)
更多經(jīng)典句型:
As everyone knows, No one can deny that…
2. 開(kāi)頭萬(wàn)能公式二:數(shù)字統(tǒng)計(jì)
原理:要想更有說(shuō)服力,就應(yīng)該用實(shí)際的數(shù)字來(lái)說(shuō)明。
原則上在議論文當(dāng)中十不應(yīng)該出現(xiàn)虛假數(shù)字的,可是在考試的時(shí)候哪管那三七二十一,但編無(wú)妨,只要我有東西寫(xiě)就萬(wàn)事大吉了。所以不妨試用下面的句型:
According to a recent survey, about 78.9% of the college students wanted to further their study after their graduation.看起來(lái)這個(gè)數(shù)字文鄒鄒的,其實(shí)都是編造出來(lái)的,下面隨便幾個(gè)題目我們都可以
英語(yǔ)作文萬(wàn)能公式
這樣編造:
Honesty
根據(jù)最近的一項(xiàng)統(tǒng)計(jì)調(diào)查顯示,大學(xué)生向老師請(qǐng)假的理由當(dāng)中78%都是假的。
Travel by Bike
根據(jù)最近的一項(xiàng)統(tǒng)計(jì)調(diào)查顯示,85%的人在近距離旅行的時(shí)候首選的交通工具是自行車(chē)。
Youth
根據(jù)最近的一項(xiàng)統(tǒng)計(jì)調(diào)查顯示,在某個(gè)大學(xué),學(xué)生的課余時(shí)間的70%都是在休閑娛樂(lè)。
Five-day Work Week Better than Six-day Work?
根據(jù)最近的一項(xiàng)統(tǒng)計(jì)調(diào)查顯示,98%的人同意每周五天工作日。
更多句型:
A recent statistics shows that …
寫(xiě)作絕招
結(jié)尾萬(wàn)能公式:
1. 結(jié)尾萬(wàn)能公式一:如此結(jié)論
說(shuō)完了,畢竟要?dú)w納一番,相信各位都有這樣的經(jīng)歷,領(lǐng)導(dǎo)長(zhǎng)篇大論,到最后終于冒出個(gè)“總而言之”之類(lèi)的話(huà),我們馬上停止開(kāi)小差,等待領(lǐng)導(dǎo)說(shuō)結(jié)束語(yǔ)。也就是說(shuō),開(kāi)頭很好,也必然要有一個(gè)精彩的結(jié)尾,讓讀者眼前一亮,這樣,你就可以拿高分了!比如下面的例子:
Obviously(此為過(guò)渡短語(yǔ)), we can draw the conclusion that good manners
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arise from politeness and respect for others.如果讀者很難“顯而見(jiàn)之”,但說(shuō)無(wú)妨,就當(dāng)讀者的眼光太淺罷了!
更多過(guò)渡短語(yǔ):
to sum up, in conclusion, in brief, on account of this, thus
更多句型:
Thus, it can be concluded that…, Therefore, we can find that…
2. 結(jié)尾萬(wàn)能公式二:如此建議
如果說(shuō)“如此結(jié)論”是結(jié)尾最沒(méi)用的廢話(huà),那么“如此建議”應(yīng)該是最有價(jià)值的廢話(huà)了,因?yàn)檫@里雖然也是廢話(huà),但是卻用了一個(gè)很經(jīng)典的虛擬語(yǔ)氣的句型。拽!
Obviously, it is high time that we took some measures to solve the problem.這里的虛擬語(yǔ)氣用得很經(jīng)典,因?yàn)榭脊俦緛?lái)經(jīng)??歼@個(gè)句型,而如果我們自己寫(xiě)出來(lái),你說(shuō)考官會(huì)怎么想呢?
更多句型:
Accordingly, I recommend that some measures be taken.Consequently, to solve the problem, some measures should be taken.寫(xiě)作絕招
寫(xiě)作的“七項(xiàng)基本原則”:
一、長(zhǎng) 短 句原則
工作還得一張一馳呢,老讓讀者讀長(zhǎng)句,累死人!寫(xiě)一個(gè)短小精辟的句子,相反,英語(yǔ)作文萬(wàn)能公式
卻可以起到畫(huà)龍點(diǎn)睛的作用。而且如果我們把短句放在段首或者段末,也可以揭示主題:
Asa creature, I eat;as a man, I read.Although one action is to meet theprimary need of my body and the other is to satisfy the intellectualneed of mind, they are in a way quite similar.如此可見(jiàn),長(zhǎng)短句結(jié)合,抑揚(yáng)頓挫,豈不爽哉?牢記!
強(qiáng)烈建議:在文章第一段(開(kāi)頭)用一長(zhǎng)一短,且先長(zhǎng)后短;在文章主體部分,要先用一個(gè)短句解釋主要意思,然后在闡述幾個(gè)要點(diǎn)的時(shí)候采用先短后長(zhǎng)的句群形式,定會(huì)讓主體部分妙筆生輝!文章結(jié)尾一般用一長(zhǎng)一短就可以了。
二、主 題 句原則
國(guó)有其君,家有其主,文章也要有其主。否則會(huì)給人造成“群龍無(wú)首”之感!相信各位讀過(guò)一些破爛文學(xué),故意把主體隱藏在文章之內(nèi),結(jié)果造成我們稀里糊涂!不知所云!所以奉勸各位一定要寫(xiě)一個(gè)主題句,放在文章的開(kāi)頭(保險(xiǎn)型)或者結(jié)尾,讓讀者一目了然,必會(huì)平安無(wú)事!
特別提示:隱藏主體句可是要冒險(xiǎn)的!
To begin with, you must work hard at your lessons and be fully prepared before the exam(主題句).Without sufficient preparation, you can hardly expect to answer all the questions correctly.三、一 二 三原則
領(lǐng)導(dǎo)講話(huà)總是第一部分、第一點(diǎn)、第二點(diǎn)、第三點(diǎn)、第二部分、第一點(diǎn)… 如此羅嗦??僧吘惯€是條理清楚??脊賯兛次恼乱脖厝灰ㄟ^(guò)這些關(guān)鍵性的“標(biāo)簽”來(lái)判定你的文章是否結(jié)構(gòu)清楚,條理自然。破解方法很簡(jiǎn)單,只要把下面任何一組的詞匯加入到你的幾個(gè)要點(diǎn)前就清楚了。
1)first, second, third, last(不推薦,原因:俗)
2)firstly, secondly, thirdly, finally(不推薦,原因:俗)
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3)the first, the second, the third, the last(不推薦,原因:俗)
4)in the first place, in the second place, in the third place, lastly(不推薦,原因:俗)
5)to begin with, then, furthermore, finally(強(qiáng)烈推薦)
6)to start with, next, in addition, finally(強(qiáng)烈推薦)
7)first and foremost, besides, last but not least(強(qiáng)烈推薦)
8)most important of all, moreover, finally
9)on the one hand, on the other hand(適用于兩點(diǎn)的情況)
10)for one thing, for another thing(適用于兩點(diǎn)的情況)建議:不僅僅在寫(xiě)作中注意,平時(shí)說(shuō)話(huà)的時(shí)候也應(yīng)該條理清楚!
四、短語(yǔ)優(yōu)先原則
寫(xiě)作時(shí),尤其是在考試時(shí),如果使用短語(yǔ),有兩個(gè)好處:其
一、用短語(yǔ)會(huì)使文章增加亮點(diǎn),如果老師們看到你的文章太簡(jiǎn)單,看不到一個(gè)自己不認(rèn)識(shí)的短語(yǔ),必然會(huì)看你低一等。相反,如果發(fā)現(xiàn)亮點(diǎn)—精彩的短語(yǔ),那么你的文章定會(huì)得高分了。其
二、關(guān)鍵時(shí)刻思維短路,只有湊字?jǐn)?shù),怎么辦?用短語(yǔ)是一個(gè)辦法!比如:
I cannot bear it.可以用短語(yǔ)表達(dá):I cannot put up with it.I want it.可以用短語(yǔ)表達(dá):I am looking forward to it.這樣字?jǐn)?shù)明顯增加,表達(dá)也更準(zhǔn)確。
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五、多實(shí)少虛原則
原因很簡(jiǎn)單,寫(xiě)文章還是應(yīng)該寫(xiě)一些實(shí)際的東西,不要空話(huà)連篇。這就要求一定要多用實(shí)詞,少用虛詞。我這里所說(shuō)的虛詞就是指那些比較大的詞。比如我們說(shuō)一個(gè)很好的時(shí)候,不應(yīng)該之說(shuō)nice這樣空洞的詞,應(yīng)該使用一些諸如generous, humorous, interesting, smart, gentle, warm-hearted, hospital 之類(lèi)的形象詞。再比如:
走出房間,general的詞是:walk out of the room
但是小偷走出房間應(yīng)該說(shuō):slip out of the room 小姐走出房間應(yīng)該說(shuō):sail out of the room
小孩走出房間應(yīng)該說(shuō):dance out of the room
老人走出房間應(yīng)該說(shuō):stagger out of the room
所以多用實(shí)詞,少用虛詞,文章將會(huì)大放異彩!
六、多變句式原則
1)加法(串聯(lián))
都希望寫(xiě)下很長(zhǎng)的句子,像個(gè)老外似的,可就是怕寫(xiě)錯(cuò),怎么辦,最保險(xiǎn)的寫(xiě)長(zhǎng)句的方法就是這些,可以在任何句子之間加and, 但最好是前后的句子又先后關(guān)系或者并列關(guān)系。比如說(shuō):
I enjor music and he is fond of playing guitar.如果是二者并列的,我們可以用一個(gè)超級(jí)句式:
Not only the fur coat is soft, but it is also warm.其它的短語(yǔ)可以用:
英語(yǔ)作文萬(wàn)能公式
besides, furthermore, likewise, moreover
2)轉(zhuǎn)折(拐彎抹角)
批評(píng)某人缺點(diǎn)的時(shí)候,我們總習(xí)慣先拐彎抹角說(shuō)說(shuō)他的優(yōu)點(diǎn),然后轉(zhuǎn)入正題,再說(shuō)缺點(diǎn),這種方式雖然陰險(xiǎn)了點(diǎn),可畢竟還比較容易讓人接受。所以呢,我們說(shuō)話(huà)的時(shí)候,只要在要點(diǎn)之前先來(lái)點(diǎn)廢話(huà),注意二者之間用個(gè)專(zhuān)這次就夠了。
The car was quite old, yet it was in excellent condition.The coat was thin, but it was warm.更多的短語(yǔ):
despite that, still, however, nevertheless, in spite of, despite, notwithstanding
3)因果(so, so, so)
昨天在街上我看到了一個(gè)女孩,然后我主動(dòng)搭訕,然后我們?nèi)タХ葟d,然后我們認(rèn)識(shí)了,然后我們成為了朋友…可見(jiàn),講故事的時(shí)候我們總要追求先后順序,先什么,后什么,所以然后這個(gè)詞就變得很常見(jiàn)了。其實(shí)這個(gè)詞表示的是先后或因果關(guān)系!
The snow began to fall, so we went home.更多短語(yǔ):
then, therefore, consequently, accordingly, hence, as a result, for this reason, so that
4)失衡句(頭重腳輕,或者頭輕腳重)
有些人腦袋大,身體小,或者有些人腦袋小,身體大,雖然我們不希望長(zhǎng)成這個(gè)樣子,可如果真的是這樣了,也就必然會(huì)吸引別人的注意力。文章中如果出現(xiàn)這樣的句子,就更會(huì)讓考官看到你的句子與眾不同。其實(shí)就是主語(yǔ)從句,表語(yǔ)從句,賓語(yǔ)從句的變形。
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舉例:This is what I can do.Whether he can go with us or not is not sure.同樣主語(yǔ)、賓語(yǔ)、表語(yǔ)可以改成如下的復(fù)雜成分: When to go, Why he goes away…
5)附加(多此一舉)
如果有了老婆,總會(huì)遇到這樣的情況,當(dāng)你再講某個(gè)人的時(shí)候,她會(huì)插一句說(shuō),我昨天見(jiàn)過(guò)他;或者說(shuō),就是某某某,如果把老婆的話(huà)插入到我們的話(huà)里面,那就是定語(yǔ)從句和同位語(yǔ)從句或者是插入語(yǔ)。
The man whom you met yesterday is a friend of mine.I don’t enjoy that book you are reading.Mr liu, our oral English teacher, is easy-going.其實(shí)很簡(jiǎn)單,同位語(yǔ)--要解釋的東西刪除后不影響整個(gè)句子的構(gòu)成;定語(yǔ)從句—借用之前的關(guān)鍵詞并且用其重新組成一個(gè)句子插入其中,但是whom or that 關(guān)鍵詞必須要緊跟在先行詞之前。
6)排比(排山倒海句)
文學(xué)作品中最吸引人的地方莫過(guò)于此,如果非要讓你的文章更加精彩的話(huà),那么我希望你引用一個(gè)個(gè)的排比句,一個(gè)個(gè)得對(duì)偶句,一個(gè)個(gè)的不定式,一個(gè)個(gè)地詞,一個(gè)個(gè)的短語(yǔ),如此表達(dá)將會(huì)使文章有排山倒海之勢(shì)!
Whether your tastes are modern or traditional, sophisticated or simple, there is plenty in London for you.Nowadays, energy can be obtained through various sources such as oil, coal, natural gas, solar heat, the wind and ocean tides.英語(yǔ)作文萬(wàn)能公式
We have got to study hard, to enlarge our scope of knowledge, to realize our potentials and to pay for our life.(氣勢(shì)恢宏)
要想寫(xiě)出如此氣勢(shì)恢宏的句子非用排比不可!
七、挑戰(zhàn)極限原則
既然十挑戰(zhàn)極限,必然是比較難的,但是并非不可攀!
原理:在學(xué)生的文章中,很少發(fā)現(xiàn)諸如獨(dú)立主格的句子,其實(shí)也很簡(jiǎn)單,只要花上5分鐘的時(shí)間看看就可以領(lǐng)會(huì),它就是分詞的一種特殊形式,分詞要求主語(yǔ)一致,而獨(dú)立主格則不然。比如:
The weather being fine, a large number of people went to climb the Western Hills.Africa is the second largest continent, its size being about three times that of China.如果您可一些出這樣的句子,不得高分才怪!
寫(xiě)作絕招
文章主體段落三大殺手锏:
一、舉實(shí)例
思維短路,舉實(shí)例!提出一個(gè)觀點(diǎn),舉實(shí)例!提出一個(gè)方案,舉實(shí)例!而且者也是我們揭示一個(gè)觀點(diǎn)最好的方式,任何情況下,只要我們無(wú)法繼續(xù)文章,不管三七二十一,盡管舉例子!
Inorder to attract more customers, advertisers have adopted everypossible stimulative factor in making ads, such as sound, light,colours, cartoon films and human performance.For instance, toadvertise a certain food, advertisers
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will ask an actor or actress tosit at a table and devour the seemingly delicious food while they fimehim or her.rast
更多句型:
To take … as an example, One example is…, Another example is…, for example
二、做比較
方法:寫(xiě)完一個(gè)要點(diǎn),比較與之相似的;又寫(xiě)完一個(gè)要點(diǎn),再比較與之相反的;
世界上沒(méi)有同樣的指紋,沒(méi)有相同的樹(shù)葉,文章亦同,只有通過(guò)比較,你才會(huì)發(fā)現(xiàn)二者的相同點(diǎn)(through comparison)和不同點(diǎn)(through contrast)。下面是一些短語(yǔ):
相似的比較:
in comparison, likewise, similarly, in the same manner
相反的比較:
on the other hand, conversely, whereas, while, instead, nevertheless, in contrast, on the contrary, compared with …, …
這個(gè)對(duì) compare and contrast 題型很有用
三、換言之
沒(méi)話(huà)說(shuō)了,可以換一句話(huà)再說(shuō),讓你的文章在多一些字,或者文鄒鄒地說(shuō),是讓讀者更充分的理解你的觀點(diǎn)。
實(shí)際就是重復(fù)重復(fù)再重復(fù)!下面的句子實(shí)際上就三個(gè)字 I love you!
I am enthusiastic about you.That is to say, I love you.英語(yǔ)作文萬(wàn)能公式
I am wild about you.In other words, I have fallen in love with you.或者上面我們舉過(guò)的例子:
I cannot bear it.可以用短語(yǔ)表達(dá):I cannot put up with it.因此可以這樣說(shuō):I cannot bear it.That is to say, I cannot put up with it or I am fed up with it.更多短語(yǔ):
in more difficult language, in simpler