第一篇:廣東高考英語寫作素材積累
2014年廣東高考英語寫作素材積累
寫作高級短語積累
1.be closely related to…與…息息相關(guān) 2.be essential to sb 對某人來說必不可少
3.in a society with more competitions and challenges / in a competitive society
4.feel frustrated(挫折的)/ discouraged5.a precious(寶貴的)experience 6.raise / arouse the awareness of …
7.acquire knowledge and skills學(xué)習(xí)知識和技能 8.a growing /increasing tendency9.have a desire for sth / to do sth 10.put sth into practice 11.be keen on… 熱衷于…
12.broaden one’s horizons開闊眼界 13.a large variety of / a wide range of … 14.make one’s dream come true
15.lay a solid/firm/stable foundation for/in…
為…/在…方面打下堅實的基礎(chǔ) 16.listen to teachers attentively 17.make a practical plan
18.hold the strong belief that…
19.I’m confident / I’m convinced that… 20.with iron will and perseverance21.pursue one’s dream追逐夢想
22.arouse one’s passion for…喚起對…的熱情 23.resist the temptation of good food 24.change one’s original mind
25.spare no effort to do sth不遺余力做… 26.redouble one’s effort 加倍努力 27.leave a deep impression on sb 28.turn to sb for help / advice
29.relieve/lessen/reduce/ease one’s burden 30.with time going by=as time goes by 31.cherish/treasure/value our lives 32.vary from person to person 33.a boarding school 寄宿制學(xué)校
34.What surprised me most was that… 35.cause severe consequences(后果)
36.pay their tuition/school fees/schooling37.physically and mentally
38.Some in favor of it think that…., while others are against it, holding the opinion that…
39.Success stems from hard work as it can help us accomplish the goal we’re striving for.40.establish a special fund to help the poor 41.its negative aspect/impact is also obvious.42.motivate sb to do sth
43.bury oneself into study埋頭學(xué)習(xí)44.our determination and efforts
45.express my gratitude to her sincerely46.be strict with sb in sth 47.achieve the final victory
48.encounter/face some difficulties 49.neglect the disadvantages
50.With the great efforts we’ve made, … 51.enhance/improve his ability of singing 52.be optimistic about
【勇氣篇】
1.No cross, no crown.不經(jīng)歷風(fēng)雨,怎么見彩虹? 2.Life is not all roses.人生并不是康莊大道。
3.All things are difficult before they are easy.凡事總是由難而易。4.Failure is the mother of success.失敗是成功之母。5.Let bygones be bygones.過去的就讓它過去吧。
6.Never too old to learn, never too late to turn.亡羊補牢,為時未晚。7.Never say die.永不言敗。
8.Adversity makes a man wise, not rich.逆境出人才。
9.A good beginning is half done.良好的開端是成功的一半。10.No gains without pains.吃得苦中苦方為人上人。11.Success belongs to the persevering.堅持就是勝利。
12.He laughs best who laughs last.誰笑到最后,誰笑得最好?!鞠r篇】
13.Knowledge is power.知識就是力量。
14.It is never too old to learn.活到老,學(xué)到老。
15.Time flies.光陰似箭。
16.Lost time is never found again.歲月既往,一去不回。
17.Time and tide wait for no man.歲月不饒人。
18.A young idler, an old beggar.少壯不努力,老大徒傷悲。
19.An hour in the morning is worth two in the evening.一日之計在于晨。
20.Every minute counts.分秒必爭。
【習(xí)慣篇】
21.Custom makes all things easy.有個好習(xí)慣,事事皆不難。
22.Do nothing by halves.凡事不可半途而廢。
23.Constant dripping wears away a stone.水滴石穿,繩鋸木斷。
【追求篇】
24.Great hopes make great man.偉大的抱負(fù)造就偉大的人物。
25.Nothing seek, nothing find.沒有追求就沒有收獲。
【雜錦篇】
26.Confidence in yourself is the first step on the road to success.自信是走向成功的第一步。
27.Every man is the architect of his own fortune.自己的命運自己掌握。
28.Genius is nothing but labor and diligence.天才不過是勤奮而已。
29.A mother's love never changes.母愛永恒。
30.Children are what the mothers are.耳濡目染,身教言傳。
31.Easier said than done.說時容易做時難。
32.A friend in need is a friend indeed.患難見真情。
33.A faithful friend is hard to find.知音難覓。
34.All good things come to an end.天下沒有不散的筵席。
35.Every man has his faults.金無足赤,人無完人。
36.Diamond cuts diamond.強中自有強中手。
37.Knowledge makes humble, ignorance makes proud.博學(xué)使人謙遜,無知使人驕傲。
38.A good book is the best of friends, the same today and forever.一本好書相伴一生。
39.There is no royal road to learning.書山有路勤為徑,學(xué)海無涯苦作舟。
40.Gold will not buy anything.黃金并非萬能。
41.Handsome is he who does handsomely.行為漂亮才算美。
42.Honesty is the best policy.做人誠信為本。
43.It is the unforeseen that always happens.天有不測風(fēng)云,人有旦夕禍福。
44.Man proposes, God disposes.謀事在人,成事在天。
45.Every advantage has its disadvantage.有利必有弊。
46.Look before you leap.三思而后行。
47.Every man has his hobbyhorse.蘿卜青菜,各有所愛。
48.All roads lead to Rome.條條大路通羅馬。
49.Do as the Romans do.入鄉(xiāng)隨俗。
50.A merry heart goes all the way.心曠神怡,事事順利。
讀寫任務(wù)素材積累
一、面對挑戰(zhàn)的感悟this, I realize thatand never give up.I’m sure to achieve final victory and become.二、怎樣看待司機的行為?
After reading the passage, I felt very angry with the driver.what he did shock me.I can’t believe the driver is so cruel., the responsibility of a bus driver is to serve people.However, the driver is essential.’s arm was stuck in the bus door, he continued to drive his bus.三、對交友的看法, good relationship with others.You can’t ’t expect to become good friends with others if you do not spend time with them.四、對心理問題的看法,in universities middle schools.I believeis more important than good grades., parents and teachers should firststudents’ feelings.they feel it fun to study,五、對網(wǎng)絡(luò)教育的看法
this new form of education.It candifferent learners moreways to learn., with online education, we canthe latest knowledge.六、對“自我表現(xiàn)與謙虛”的看法
good communication,one’s achievements and advantages properly others, can In modern society,can help others know ,.Sois that one’s confidence must be true of one’s real case.To Chinese people, think you are good at nothing., modesty doesn’tmean hiding one’s own strong points or keeping silent.One must learn to sell himself , blowing one’s trumpet and modesty, can be combined and balanced.七、態(tài)度決定一切的啟示
Different attitudes , He’s my classmate.He alwaysstudy, so he has becomein our class., he’., Xiao Li never cares about his study andthe teachers’ advice., he
八、對…行為的看法, Marry is really great because she’s ready to do….Maybe verybut it willour daily life.九、目標(biāo)的重要性(看法)
I and gives me strength to , goals are important in our life., as goals oftenin our life.be , they canour life more fulfilling(令人滿意的).十、對考驗的感受
From the story I’ve learned thatarein our growth.“No cross, no crown(不經(jīng)歷風(fēng)雨怎么見彩虹).difficulties in our life up
十一、對中學(xué)生活的感受, , is to realizing my dream of.So I seldom have time to do outdoor activities., I’ve become more independent and as a student of become a.十二、有關(guān)命運轉(zhuǎn)折點的啟示
The passage inspired me hands.Although he was hopeless in any sport at school, He didn’t give up.what others say about him, he
十三、對街頭食品的看法, I oftensome street food morning becauseme.As a student, I can’t spend much time waiting or eating in a restaurant.street food is very popular in cities and towns because they are tasty, quick and cheap, Most of them arebusy with their study and work they can’t
their meals.十四、如何更好地鼓勵孩子學(xué)習(xí)
To , I think we should not treat every child.To some kidsDon’t for only the top score.Maybe parents.十五、如何適應(yīng)大學(xué)生活
ideal university life should help me society,I think Iall kinds of activities, my ideal university life.十六、建設(shè)生態(tài)學(xué)校,你該做點什么?, first I must tell my schoolmates about the importance of.Then we can used and saving water.We should always and change the environment
十七、離家出走建議 , trust and communication are.Why don’t you try toknow
You can also get some help from ideal friends—someone like your teacher, or neighbor,.十八、可以采取哪些措施解決污染問題
Many people have but others still haven’t, soto solve environmental problems.For example, our government shouldand to protect our natural resources.十九、怎樣應(yīng)對同伴壓力
First of all, since the whole world is , we have to know that Secondly and you’ll really feel better.
第二篇:2012年廣東高考英語寫作素材積累
2014年廣東高考英語寫作素材積累(3)
廣東河源市河源中學(xué) 黃李雅
寫作高級短語積累
1.be closely related to…與…息息相關(guān) 2.be essential to sb 對某人來說必不可少
3.in a society with more competitions and challenges / in a competitive society
4.feel frustrated(挫折的)/ discouraged5.a precious(寶貴的)experience 6.raise / arouse the awareness of …
7.acquire knowledge and skills學(xué)習(xí)知識和技能 8.a growing /increasing tendency9.have a desire for sth / to do sth 10.put sth into practice 11.be keen on… 熱衷于…
12.broaden one’s horizons開闊眼界 13.a large variety of / a wide range of … 14.make one’s dream come true
15.lay a solid/firm/stable foundation for/in…
為…/在…方面打下堅實的基礎(chǔ) 16.listen to teachers attentively 17.make a practical plan
18.hold the strong belief that…
19.I’m confident / I’m convinced that… 20.with iron will and perseverance21.pursue one’s dream追逐夢想
22.arouse one’s passion for…喚起對…的熱情 23.resist the temptation of good food 24.change one’s original mind
25.spare no effort to do sth不遺余力做… 26.redouble one’s effort 加倍努力
27.leave a deep impression on sb 28.turn to sb for help / advice
29.relieve/lessen/reduce/ease one’s burden 30.with time going by=as time goes by 31.cherish/treasure/value our lives 32.vary from person to person 33.a boarding school 寄宿制學(xué)校
34.What surprised me most was that… 35.cause severe consequences(后果)
36.pay their tuition/school fees/schooling37.physically and mentally
38.Some in favor of it think that…., while others are against it, holding the opinion that… 39.Success stems from hard work as it can help us accomplish the goal we’re striving for.40.establish a special fund to help the poor 41.its negative aspect/impact is also obvious.42.motivate sb to do sth
43.bury oneself into study埋頭學(xué)習(xí)44.our determination and efforts
45.express my gratitude to her sincerely46.be strict with sb in sth 47.achieve the final victory
48.encounter/face some difficulties 49.neglect the disadvantages
50.With the great efforts we’ve made, … 51.enhance/improve his ability of singing 52.be optimistic about
讀寫任務(wù)素材積累
一、面對挑戰(zhàn)的感悟
this, I realize that , I will never give up.I’m sure to achieve final victory and become
二、怎樣看待司機的行為?
After reading the passage, I felt very angry with the driver.what he can’t believe the driver is so cruel.However, the driver isessential.the woman’s arm was stuck in the bus door, he continued to drive his bus.三、對交友的看法,good relationship with others.You can’t friends with someone ’t expect to become good friends with others if you do not spend time with them.四、對心理問題的看法
are serious problems in universities middle schools.I believeis more important than good grades., parents and teachers should firststudents’ feelings.they feel it fun to study,their lessons well.五、對網(wǎng)絡(luò)教育的看法, Ithis new form of education.It can different learners moreways to learn.六、對“自我表現(xiàn)與謙虛”的看法, good communication, one’s achievements and advantages properlycan help others knowmay be an exampleis that one’s confidence must be true of one’s real case.To Chinese people, you are good at nothing.’tmean hiding one’s own strong points or keeping silent.One must learn to sell himself blowing one’s trumpet and modesty, , can be combined and balanced.七、態(tài)度決定一切的啟示
Different attitudes different results.Xiao Hua , He’s my classmate.He alwaysstudy, so he has becomein our class.’ succeed in.his study andthe teachers’ advice., heothers in his study.八、對…行為的看法
’s ready to do….Maybeis verybut it willour daily life.九、目標(biāo)的重要性(看法)
Iand gives me strength to., goals are important in our life., as goals often in our life.goals webecanour life more fulfilling(令人滿意的).十、對考驗的感受
From the story I’ve learned that are in our growth.“No cross, no crown(不經(jīng)歷風(fēng)雨怎么見彩虹).difficulties in our life.十一、對中學(xué)生活的感受,is to dream of.So I seldom have time to do outdoor activities., I’ve
become more independent and as a student of , my experience has become a.十二、有關(guān)命運轉(zhuǎn)折點的啟示
The passage inspired meas I come to know that the happiness of life Although he was hopeless in any sport at school, He didn’t give up.what others say about him, heto improve himself
十三、對街頭食品的看法, I oftensome street foodschool in the morning because ’t spend much time waiting or eating in a restaurant.street food is very popular in cities and towns because they are tasty, quick and cheap,every day.Most of them are and work they can’t
十四、如何更好地鼓勵孩子學(xué)習(xí)
To.To some kids.Don’tfor only the top score.,with other kids.Maybeis to watch a movie or go on a trip together with their parents.十五、如何適應(yīng)大學(xué)生活, college life middle school life a lot.So I think the ideal university life should help meI think Istudy hard to achieve my ideal university life.十六、建設(shè)生態(tài)學(xué)校,你該做點什么?, first I must tell my schoolmates about the importance of , such as collecting used and saving water.We should always
十七、離家出走建議 ’t you try to talking to your mother about your emotions?to feel better.You can also get some help from ideal friends—someone like your teacher, or neighbor,十八、可以采取哪些措施解決污染問題
Many people have haven’t, so to solve environmental problems.For example, our government shouldand to protect our natural resources.everyone knows the importance of the environmental protectionto live in!
十九、怎樣應(yīng)對同伴壓力
First of all, since the whole world is.Secondly and you’ll really feel better.
第三篇:2012年廣東高考英語寫作素材積累
英語寫作素材積累(3)寫作高級短語積累
1.be closely related to…與…息息相關(guān) 2.be essential to sb 對某人來說必不可少 3.in a society with more competitions and challenges / in a competitive society 4.feel frustrated(挫折的)/ discouraged5.a precious(寶貴的)experience 6.raise / arouse the awareness of …
7.acquire knowledge and skills學(xué)習(xí)知識和技能 8.a growing /increasing tendency9.have a desire for sth / to do sth 10.put sth into practice 11.be keen on… 熱衷于…
12.broaden one’s horizons開闊眼界 13.a large variety of / a wide range of … 14.make one’s dream come true
15.lay a solid/firm/stable foundation for/in…
為…/在…方面打下堅實的基礎(chǔ) 16.listen to teachers attentively 17.make a practical plan18.hold the strong belief that… 19.I’m confident / I’m convinced that… 20.with iron will and perseverance21.pursue one’s dream追逐夢想
22.arouse one’s passion for…喚起對…的熱情 23.resist the temptation of good food 24.change one’s original mind
25.spare no effort to do sth不遺余力做… 26.redouble one’s effort 加倍努力 27.leave a deep impression on sb 28.turn to sb for help / advice
29.relieve/lessen/reduce/ease one’s burden 30.with time going by=as time goes by 31.cherish/treasure/value our lives 32.vary from person to person 33.a boarding school 寄宿制學(xué)校 34.What surprised me most was that… 35.cause severe consequences(后果)36.pay their tuition/school fees/schooling37.physically and mentally
38.Some in favor of it think that…., while others are against it, holding the opinion that… 39.Success stems from hard work as it can help us accomplish the goal we’re striving for.40.establish a special fund to help the poor 41.its negative aspect/impact is also obvious.42.motivate sb to do sth
43.bury oneself into study埋頭學(xué)習(xí)44.our determination and efforts 45.express my gratitude to her sincerely46.be strict with sb in sth 47.achieve the final victory 48.encounter/face some difficulties
49.neglect the disadvantages
50.With the great efforts we’ve made, … 51.enhance/improve his ability of singing 52.be optimistic about
讀寫任務(wù)素材積累
一、面對挑戰(zhàn)的感悟this, I realize that , I will never give up.I’m sure to achieve final victory and become
二、怎樣看待司機的行為?
After reading the passage, I felt very angry with the driver.what he can’t believe the driver is so cruel.However, the driver isessential.the woman’s arm was stuck in the bus door, he continued to drive his bus.三、對交友的看法,good relationship with others.You can’t friends with someone you meet him.You also can’t expect to become good friends with others if you do not spend time with them.四、對心理問題的看法,are serious problems in universities middle schools.I believeis more important than good grades., parents and teachers should firststudents’ feelings.they feel it fun to study,their lessons well.五、對網(wǎng)絡(luò)教育的看法 , Ithis new form of education.It can different learners moreways to learn.六、對“自我表現(xiàn)與謙虛”的看法, good communication, one’s achievements and advantages properlycan help others knowmay be an exampleis that one’s confidence must be true of one’s real case.To Chinese people, you are good at nothing.mean hiding one’s own strong points or keeping silent.One must learn to sell himself blowing one’s trumpet and modesty, , can be combined and balanced.七、態(tài)度決定一切的啟示
Different attitudesdifferent results.Hua , He’s my classmate.He alwaysstudy, so he has becomein our class.succeed in.his study andthe teachers’ advice., heothers in his study.八、對…行為的看法.Maybeis verybut it willour daily life.九、目標(biāo)的重要性(看法)
Iand gives me strength to., goals are important in our life., as goals often in our life.goals webecanour life more fulfilling(令人滿意的).十、對考驗的感受
From the story I’ve learned that are in our growth.“No cross, no crown(不經(jīng)歷風(fēng)雨怎么見彩虹).difficulties in our life.十一、對中學(xué)生活的感受,is to dream of.So I seldom have time to do outdoor activities., I’ve become more independent and as a student of , my experience has become a.十二、有關(guān)命運轉(zhuǎn)折點的啟示
The passage inspired meas I come to know that the happiness of life Although he was hopeless in any sport at school, He didn’t give up.what others say about him, heto improve himself
十三、對街頭食品的看法 , I oftensome street foodschool in the morning because s a student, I can’t spend much time waiting or eating in a restaurant.street food is very popular in cities and towns because they are tasty, quick and cheap,every day.Most of them are and work they can’t
十四、如何更好地鼓勵孩子學(xué)習(xí)
To.To some kids.Don’tfor only the top score.,with other kids.Maybeis to watch a movie or go on a trip together with their parents.十五、如何適應(yīng)大學(xué)生活, college life middle school life a lot.So I think the ideal university life should help meI think Istudy hard to achieve my ideal university life.十六、建設(shè)生態(tài)學(xué)校,你該做點什么?, first I must tell my schoolmates about the importance of , such as collecting used and saving water.We should always
十七、離家出走建議 talking to your mother about your emotions?to feel better.You can also get some help from ideal friends—someone like your teacher, or neighbor,十八、可以采取哪些措施解決污染問題
Many people have haven’t, so to solve environmental problems.For example, our government shouldand to protect our natural resources.everyone knows the importance of the environmental protectionto live in!
十九、怎樣應(yīng)對同伴壓力
First of all, since the whole world is.Secondly and you’ll really feel better.
第四篇:寫作素材積累
寫作素材積累
一、名人名言
1、與朋友交,嚴(yán)而有信?!鬃?/p>
2、近朱者赤,近墨者黑?!敌?/p>
3、海內(nèi)存知己,天涯若比鄰.---------王勃
4、萬兩黃金容易得,知心一個也難求?!苎┣?/p>
5、人生得一知己足矣,斯世當(dāng)以同懷視之。-----魯迅
6、一個籬笆三個樁,一個好漢三個幫?!珴蓶|
7、朋友間必須是患難相濟(jì),那才能是說的上是真正的友誼。------莎士比亞
8、朋友,不只是困境中的互相幫助,痛苦地向相互撫慰,相聚時的歡聲笑語,誤會是的相互體諒,還有別時的叮嚀,別后的牽念……有朋友的的感覺真好??!-----佚名
9、財富不是永久的朋友,但朋友是永久的財富。-------列夫 托爾斯泰
10、世間最美好的東西,莫過于有幾個有頭腦和信心地都很正直的朋友。-----愛因斯坦
11、朋友是生活中的陽光。------易卜生
12、朋友間的不和,就是敵人進(jìn)攻的機會?!了?/p>
13、真實的十分理智的友誼,是人生最美好的無價之寶?!郀柣?/p>
14、誰若想在厄運時得到援助,就應(yīng)在平日待人以寬?!úㄋ梗┧_迪
15、友誼需要—-忠誠去播種,熱情去灌溉,原則去培養(yǎng),諒解去護(hù)理?!聡V語
16、背后稱贊我們的人就是我們的良友?!ㄎ鳎┤f提斯
17、真正的朋友,在你獲得成功的時候,為你高興,而不捧場。在你遇到不幸或悲傷的時候,會給你及時的支持和鼓勵。在你有缺點可能犯錯誤的時候,會給你正確的批評和幫助。——(前蘇)高爾基
18、人生離不開友誼,但要得到真正的友誼才是不容易;友誼總需要忠誠去播種,用熱情去灌溉,用原則去培養(yǎng),用諒解去護(hù)理。——馬克思
二、鮮活素材高山流水
春秋時期有位出色的音樂家伯牙。他精于彈琴,據(jù)說他彈琴時連吃草的馬也會抬頭傾聽。而當(dāng)時最懂伯牙琴技之妙的,莫過于鐘子期。伯牙用琴表現(xiàn)高山情懷,鐘子期聽后說:“善哉,峨眉兮若泰山。”伯牙用琴聲表現(xiàn)流水的情調(diào)時,他聽后說:“善哉,洋洋兮若江河?!焙髞?,鐘子期因病逝世,伯牙悲痛欲絕的摔破了琴,扯斷了弦,發(fā)誓終生不再彈琴。
管鮑之交
春秋時,齊國的管仲與鮑叔牙是好朋友,但是兩人各事其主。后鮑叔牙侍奉的公子小白被立為國君,鮑叔牙卻向國軍齊桓公薦管仲為相而自己甘居其下。在管仲的輔助下齊國日益強大,最終成為“九分諸侯,一匡天下”的霸王。成功后的管仲十分感慨地說:“生我者父母,知我者鮑子也?!?/p>
人生得一知己足矣
魯迅與瞿秋白相識于1932年春夏之間,彼此一見如故,十分相契。從此后他們?yōu)橥苿痈锩幕\動而并肩戰(zhàn)斗,結(jié)下深厚友誼。在白色恐怖中,瞿秋白避難于魯迅家中,后魯迅為瞿秋白安置住處,讓他用白之的筆名發(fā)表雜文,魯迅曾親筆題寫了由瞿秋白擬寫的對聯(lián)“人生得一知己足矣,斯世當(dāng)以同懷視之”贈給瞿秋白。在瞿秋白就義后,他仍堅持抱病為之友編印《海上述林》,以此表達(dá)深切的悼念。
生命的一半
德國偉大文學(xué)家歌德與席勒是親密的朋友。盡管他們在年齡上相差很大,并且性格氣質(zhì)也有很大不同,但是共同的追求和對文學(xué)的熱愛把他們緊緊聯(lián)系在一起。席勒寫《威廉· 退爾》的劇本,歌德便將自己搜集到的有關(guān)資料全部提供給席勒。而歌德的《威廉· 麥斯特》的寫作也得到了席勒的鼎力相助。席勒英年早逝后,歌德無比悲痛的寫道:“我失去了一個朋友,同時也是失去了我生命中的一半。”
三、美文閱讀
1、同桌的你
無意中,我從書桌里翻出了一張早已被淡忘的照片,從第二排中找到里你——我的同桌。耳邊回蕩著一首歌——同桌的你。
“你是否還會想起,向我借支鋼筆?”記得你是一個健忘的人,考試總忘記帶鋼筆,老向我借。害得一次考試后老師找我談話,說咱倆交頭接耳,可憐的我被老師批了一頓。幸好你不是那種“忘恩負(fù)義”之人,下課后你悄悄塞給我一塊糖,使我的“苦”中又透著幾分甜意。
“你是否還會想起,美術(shù)課尷尬的你?”你的數(shù)學(xué)思維如此靈活,但卻是一位“抽象”美術(shù)大師。數(shù)學(xué)課上生龍活虎的你,美術(shù)課上卻成了一只兔子,一聲不吭??墒抢蠋焻s偏偏喜歡叫你,這可難為了同學(xué)的眼睛------你畫的火炬像冰棍,畫的房子像土洞……..正因為有你的涂鴉,平時我最喜歡的課除了體育就是美術(shù)。
說到體育,你可真厲害。外表看起來弱不禁風(fēng)的你,竟是一個不折不扣的體育迷,800米跑如一匹野馬,跳遠(yuǎn)超過了上屆第一,又有那么多的人喜歡與你一起打籃球……
“誰把你的書包整理,把書本擺放整齊?”你總是帶著全部的書,卻從不整理,這也許是男孩子的特征吧。記得你曾讓我這位女將幫你整理亂書,我居然同意了,望著那整齊的書,我竟十分得意!
畢業(yè)典禮那天,你告訴我你要遠(yuǎn)行去北京話讀書。我們最后一次坐在同一張課桌。畢竟兩年了,我強忍著內(nèi)心的不舍,終于道出了一句話:“你現(xiàn)在知道火炬怎么畫了吧?”你笑了,眼圈有些潮,但笑容依然那么燦爛。
同桌的你,現(xiàn)在到底怎么樣了?我真的好想知道。你的體育成績?nèi)阅敲磧?yōu)秀嗎?美術(shù)的成績有所長進(jìn)嗎?我真想把《同桌的你》唱給你聽,和你共同回味難忘的小學(xué)時光。
升格點評
小學(xué)升初中階段,正是孩子剛剛踏入青春期,用與小學(xué)完全不同的視角觀察社會和他人的時期,內(nèi)心的體驗十分敏感。本文的小作者細(xì)膩的挑選了同桌的三個小片段,巧妙地套用了三句歌詞,把同桌的男孩描寫的生動形象,讀來既能讓人體會到孩子的天真爛漫,又能感覺到學(xué)生在成長,讓人不禁會心一笑。
2、我的同桌
我的同桌是一個美麗漂亮的女生,她有一頭迷人的長發(fā),那雙炯炯有神的大眼睛水汪汪的,動人極了。她高高的鼻梁,一張櫻桃小口總是那樣微笑著,面頰上時常露出甜甜的酒窩。
她長得漂亮,許多人都羨慕她。哦,對了,她的名字叫高銘瑤。
別看我們是一個班,而且還是一桌,可我們倆的性格一點也不一樣。她平時一句話都不說,可辦事想得非常周到,特別仔細(xì)、一絲不茍。因此同學(xué)送她個外號“鐵娘子”。而我的性
格是太外向了,辦事很隨意,不拘小節(jié),屬于豪放型,因此,同學(xué)也給我送了一個外號“假小子”。
這一周,是我們班值周,值周的第一天,老師選了高銘瑤當(dāng)班長。我一看她當(dāng)了班長心里很不服氣,心想:“哼!當(dāng)個班長有什么呀,不就是每天把沒帶值周牌的同學(xué)記下來嗎,讓我當(dāng),我還不稀罕呢!”
第二天,我起來晚了,急匆匆地吃完早飯后,我就去上學(xué)了。剛走到離學(xué)校不遠(yuǎn)的地方,我一下子想起了沒帶值周牌,我心想:“自己是值周生,不帶值周牌,不僅挨記,還得挨批評,回家?。坎恍?,肯定遲到,遲到也得被記,怎么辦?算了,直接到學(xué)校再說?!庇谑俏壹涌炝四_步,向?qū)W校走去。
我一到校門口,只見高銘瑤站在那兒,我眼前一亮,緊皺的眉頭舒展開了,正要走過去,只聽她說:
“你的值周牌呢?”
“哦,我忘帶了,明天一定帶。”
“那我得把你的名兒記下來?!?/p>
“什么,記我的名字,你這是為什么?你一記,我們班的流動紅旗可就沒有了!”我氣憤地說。
“不行,必須記。”她斬釘截鐵地說。
因為這件事,我從那以后再沒有和她說過話,即使她主動和我說話,我也是一轉(zhuǎn)身就走了。
有一天,正要下課時,她給了我一張紙條,上面寫著:“對不起,請你理解我,雖然上次咱班沒得著紀(jì)律紅旗,可那是用誠實換來的,誠實比金子還可貴呀!”我看了這張紙條,心想:“是啊,那天是我不對,本來我就沒理,還對她發(fā)火,這就更不應(yīng)該了?!?/p>
第二天,我來到了學(xué)校,跟她說:“是我錯了,我不該沖你發(fā)脾氣,你記我是對的,說對不起的應(yīng)該是我呀?!庇谑?,我們倆和好如初。
通過這件事,我想:她多象包拯啊,一辦起“案”來,真是鐵面無私、六親不認(rèn)呀!我的同桌是個近視眼,他很聰明但就是不愛學(xué)習(xí)。眼很小可能是因為帶眼鏡帶的吧?低矮的鼻梁是被眼鏡壓的,一張不是多會說話的嘴總是說不過我,我們相處得很融恰。
3、我的同桌
她行如風(fēng),站如松。
她光挑別人的弱點,說得讓你心服口服;她講起道理滔滔不絕,一口下去無人相比;她寫起作來文采飛揚,如果用班長的話來說,那就是神速簡直不是人。
她是讓我佩服的人,是讓我自己找會自信的人,是讓我改正錯誤的人,是讓我成天尊重她的人,是我天天看著她臉色做事的人,是她讓我更加努力的人。
是她,是她,就是她,她便是在我心目中無人能比的同桌。
“君子一言,四馬難追”同桌總是這樣訓(xùn)我。原因是我沒寫兩天前的作業(yè),說好今天早上就完成的,可我又沒寫完,這不正在唾沫飛揚的訓(xùn)我呢。我煩掉了,我發(fā)瘋了,我終于忍受不了了,真的真的不行了,我怎么覺得世界末日就要來臨了。我鼓足勇氣向她大聲喊道:“我不是君子,你是嗎?”當(dāng)然我知道在這個方面女孩子的作業(yè)總是比男孩子做的工整,交的及時。但是她卻說:
“我才不是什么君子,我是好女,讓人追求已久的月光美少女?!蔽亿s快做著加速運動跑到窗口開始吐,我無奈的喊一句:“暈,我狂暈,我吐,我狂吐?!?/p>
“不經(jīng)歷風(fēng)雨,怎能見彩虹。失敗是成功之母。堅持就是勝利”。她總是在我考試不及格或者犯錯誤的時候在我“傷口上撒鹽”,告訴我這些大道理。我只所以記的如此深刻,原因很簡單,她說的這幾句,聽的我耳朵都出了繭子了。我承認(rèn)她學(xué)習(xí)比我好,懂的大道理比我多,那也不應(yīng)該這樣對我吧,我一直對她很有意見。
我最喜歡在上課的時候爬著或者躺著聽課,只要是和我一個班的同學(xué),都知道我這個壞毛病,但自從和這個懂的大道理的丫頭坐上以后,我的天空沒了光彩,沒了自由,天天都是她的嘮叨。說這樣的行為是對老師的不尊重,這樣做是對自己身體的不負(fù)責(zé),這樣做將來你就是個植物人。我一聽楞了很久,植物人,這樣嚴(yán)重,我怎么就不知道啊,完啦,一個全新的植物人即將誕生,啊,好可怕。我立刻做正,挺胸,抬頭,之后認(rèn)真聽講起來。但是頭總是剛抬起45度角后,一下又掉到-45度了。哎!她給我來句,別總是給別人磕頭啦,他們不會給你給錢的,我忍受這傷痛心靈的刺激,我只好服從,因為她是我的上司。
她作文寫的那是不用說,如果用一個字,那就是“棒”,如果用二個字,那就是“很棒”,如果用三個字,那就是“相當(dāng)棒”。讓我很欣賞,每次考試出來,她的作文是頭條新聞,不知道讀了多少次,反正她的行為讓很多男孩子不服氣,總是說,她不是人,簡直是個變態(tài)。但是她告訴我,不理他們,走自己的路讓別人去說吧.
后來我才發(fā)現(xiàn)這個讓我討厭到極點的丫頭,這個讓我一直很有意見的同桌,這個懂的這樣多道理的人卻不自戀。我真的真的開始喜歡上人家了,我佩服她了,我開始學(xué)習(xí)她,向她看齊,她總是指導(dǎo)我的寫作。后來,經(jīng)過我的反復(fù)“走訪調(diào)查”和“用心試探”,又有了一個新的發(fā)現(xiàn),這個丫頭其實很善良,還會幫助別人呢。
那天扶老人過十字路口,我跟上她都占了光,那夸她的人,一直看著我,我一直沖著他們笑,大家說我們是好孩子,我當(dāng)時立刻就愛上了這個丫頭。心里樂的我啊,好開心,心想如果這輩子有了她,那我就幸福死了。如果把我這個粗心,卻不愛幫助人,學(xué)習(xí)又一般的人嫁給她,我真是三生有辛啊,我這樣幻想著。一下被她拍了一下頭,“走啦!”
一年后,在她的精心幫助和指導(dǎo)下,還有“監(jiān)控”和“操作”下,我這個苯的不是一般的男孩子,學(xué)會了與她一樣的道德與精神。同時和她一起走進(jìn)了這個充滿挑戰(zhàn)的天堂—畢業(yè)班。當(dāng)時我好像換了一個人,就連我的一言一行都變啦,別人都好像不認(rèn)識我了,都說這個是馬開東嗎?這都是托我同桌的服氣。我上課認(rèn)真聽了,不再爬下或者躺下,犯錯誤少的不能再少了,已經(jīng)不是以前的小孩子了,初三一年我和她又是同桌,也許這就是他們所說的緣吧,我一直珍惜著。
雖然是同桌離的很近,但是每天除了說題,別的話幾乎沒有,第一次考試過去了,當(dāng)然在她的提拔和指揮下,我由年級53名(130人)加速升到29名,她第30名。但是她卻沒因為我考過了她而不幫助我,再后來我對這個學(xué)習(xí)有了點興趣,最終沖到年級18名,她一直在30名徘徊,她微笑著對我說,“嘿嘿,今天的你已經(jīng)不是以前的你了,是我的影子了。”我笑著答道,“幸運的是謝謝上帝把你賜與給我?!彼⒖躺蟻碜嵛?,我一下拉住她的手,抱住她,我表白了,我說:“文靜我喜歡你?!痹谀且豢蹋覀兯哪肯鄬?,這輩子不會忘記。
中考悄然離去,這將意味著我們將要告別,那天的話還好沒有被風(fēng)吹散,她對我說,永遠(yuǎn)不要忘記學(xué)習(xí)第一,別的第二,忘記我你是小豬。說完笑著走開,快要轉(zhuǎn)彎了,她大聲喊著,“如果高中在一個班,我們再坐同桌?!彼蘖耍乙彩?,我沖向前去,不知道是什么力量,我不由了再次拉住她的手,之后抱住她,我對她說,“謝謝你,我不會忘記你,就算再有比你優(yōu)秀的,我只喜歡你一個,我只對你有感覺?!?/p>
后來的我們?nèi)缭敢詢數(shù)目忌狭烁咧校覂H比她高8分,同桌卻沒有做成,但是回憶總是美好的吧,現(xiàn)在一想起來真是不后悔,雖然做的過分,但是這輩子不忘記這個丫頭,更不忘記那個瞬間,不忘記那種感覺.不忘記那些銘記的日子吧!我想這輩子最難忘記的人就算她了吧。
歲月難得沉默,秋風(fēng)怨倦漂泊??粗郎系娜沼洷荆也挥上肫鹆宋业耐?,想起了我與她的一切,一切都是那樣的清晰,一切都是那樣的美好,一切都是那樣的難以忘記。因為她使我自信,勇氣,成功。如果用二個字評價我同桌,那就是偉大。
我做著勻加速運動去追求我的夢想,一路上同桌繼續(xù)給我了鼓勵,一直為我加油,我想我不會辜負(fù)她,我含淚放下一切,拉她的手走向另外一個全新的開始??
第五篇:如何積累寫作素材
如何積累寫作素材
生活中蘊涵著豐富的寫作素材,學(xué)生習(xí)作,就是用筆描述生活中的事,歌頌生活中的人,抒發(fā)生活中的情。但對于三年級的學(xué)生來說,他們往往不知道應(yīng)該怎樣去運用生活中的材料。我認(rèn)為可以通過以下幾種方式積淀素材。
一、從自己的生活中發(fā)現(xiàn)、積累素材。
生活是作文的源泉,教師要經(jīng)常引導(dǎo)學(xué)生捕捉生活中的鏡頭,以及在學(xué)校、家庭、社會出現(xiàn)的豐富多彩并具有典型意義的場景、事件和人物,用隨筆的形式把這些材料記錄下來,如課堂中隨機發(fā)生的事情,校園、班級里開展的各項活動,鄰里間的故事等?,F(xiàn)在我們學(xué)校修了塑膠跑道,校園變的比以前漂亮了,可以讓學(xué)生看看校園里的花、草、樹木等景物有什么變化?老師和學(xué)生在校園干什么?他們做的事你看了有什么想法?還有自己到學(xué)校后做了什么事?怎樣做的?還有今天老師講的什么課,有什么變化?同學(xué)與同學(xué)之間又發(fā)生了什么事?再如星期天節(jié)假日把你看到、聽到的都記下來都是很好的寫作素材。在下雨時,引導(dǎo)學(xué)生觀察下雨時,下雨后的變化,記下自己觀察到的情景。打針時,注意觀察醫(yī)生是怎么做的,打針時你的心情,打針后自己的感受。冬天來了,讓學(xué)生觀察天氣的變化,校園景物的變化和人們衣著的變化。然后把自己看見的,自己想到的記下來,學(xué)生因為是自己親眼看見的,親自體驗的,所以都寫的很好。學(xué)生在不知不覺中感受到生活中有數(shù)不盡的新鮮事,激發(fā)學(xué)生熱愛生活,去觀察生活,去發(fā)現(xiàn)生活。
我在一個下雪天指導(dǎo)學(xué)生即興作文時,讓學(xué)生到操場上去觀察雪花,學(xué)生觀察了五分鐘,仍然不肯進(jìn)教室,然后讓學(xué)生以《雪》為題寫一篇短文,描寫雪中的景色,還要寫出自己的真實感受。古今中外,歷代的作家詩人寫了不少贊美雪的詩文,但詩人與孩子的感受不會相同,學(xué)生們各自的感受也不會完全一樣。有的學(xué)生寫雪花自由自在地飄在空中,希望自己也能像雪花一樣自由,不受拘束;有的學(xué)生寫雪花落在地上不見了,我伸手去接,雪花碰到我的手就化了,我真想讓它在我手中多呆一會兒;有的則由雪想到了那些純潔如雪的人;還有好動的學(xué)生希望雪花快快落,多多地落,好出去打雪仗;??同樣的時間,同樣的景物,觀后卻有著不同的感受。由于這些都是學(xué)生內(nèi)心的真實體驗,因而每篇文章都真實感人。
二、積極開展活動,拓展學(xué)生生活的空間積累素材。
教師要緊扣教材組織學(xué)生參加校內(nèi)外活動,如小飼養(yǎng)、小制作、放風(fēng)箏、野炊、跳繩、拔河、田徑賽、球賽、故事演講會,有教育意義的專題會及各種有趣的活動等等。教師指導(dǎo)學(xué)生活動應(yīng)?!皳Q”?!靶隆保@樣才能讓學(xué)生對活動“情有獨鐘”。這也許就是人們常說的“喜歡的魅力在于不斷更新”吧!在活動中多觀察,教師一定要現(xiàn)場指
導(dǎo),先讓學(xué)生說觀察到的事物后,糾正觀察的不足及語言組織的不足,使學(xué)生及時、準(zhǔn)確、生動地把觀察到的事物“翻譯”成語言,使他們養(yǎng)成仔細(xì)觀察、捕捉觀察素材、認(rèn)真思考的好習(xí)慣,從而提高學(xué)生積累素材的能力。其次是多動,課堂上教師如能讓學(xué)生“動”起來,讓他們自編自演課本劇,多練習(xí)口語交際等讓他們學(xué)會說恰當(dāng)?shù)脑挼?。人教版第五冊第三單元都是描寫秋天的文章,在語文園地三中,口語交際和習(xí)作中要求學(xué)生說秋天的快樂,寫秋天的美麗,就可以組織學(xué)生去郊游,尋找秋天的足跡,讓學(xué)生走出教室,在生活中觀察,參與活動中,積淀習(xí)作的素材。
三、從大量閱讀的書籍中積累寫作素材。
大量的閱讀有益的書籍不僅能使我們獲得許多課外知識,還能幫助我們積累寫作素材。我們可以分類摘記。譬如,恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~、優(yōu)美語句、精彩片段等。在摘記時還可以加進(jìn)去自己的見解和認(rèn)識。這些在作文時自有妙用。
四、培養(yǎng)學(xué)生堅持寫日記的好習(xí)慣,從而積累寫作素材。
培養(yǎng)學(xué)生堅持寫日記的好習(xí)慣,不但可以培養(yǎng)學(xué)生對周圍生活的敏銳觀察力,而且學(xué)生能迅速地用語言文字表達(dá)出自己的所見所聞,所思所感。而且從日記中,學(xué)生的學(xué)習(xí)、生活、思想、家庭情況一一得到反映。對學(xué)生而言,日記成了他們吐露心聲的朋友。學(xué)生通過寫日記,懂得了更加細(xì)心地去觀察周圍的事物和人,他們的思想在寫日記的過程中得到良好的自我錘煉。對生活、身邊的人、周圍的事物產(chǎn)生了更多的理解和關(guān)愛。日積月累,學(xué)生在寫日記的過程中就積累了素材。只要我們鼓勵學(xué)生用心觀察,勤于思考,注意積累,再加上教師適當(dāng)?shù)闹笇?dǎo),學(xué)生那種“腹中空空,無話可說”,的局面就會得到改善。學(xué)生的寫作水平也會得到一定的提高。